All Comments on 'An On-the-job Surprise for Sarah'

I really loved this story !

Thank you babes! From a radiographer who fantasises about this at work more than is healthy! Love Em xxx

it was hot!!!

I'm sorry, but that really distracted me. I loved the description of his stretching her pussy, and her struggle to contain him. I love to put myself in the woman's role when I read these stories, and I just can't imagine that "nosssa" thing coming out of someone's mouth. What does that even mean?!

I had my fingers on my clit, ready to cum, and this word kept interfering! Please edit.

these are really good, well written stories..... but unless the women at least begins to enjoy it, then the story loses its edge. in this one, sarah just keeps crying, even through the orgasms. thats not erotic, its disturbing.

A cock cannot penetrate a cervix. Ever. Don't pretend that's possible, it ruined an otherwise hot story.

What the he'll does that mean? It just made a pretty damn good story annoying. Use real words!

Agree with the others on the Noooosa thing. What does that even mean?? It really took the enjoyment out of the story for me. Is that your bedroom name or something, I mean what is the connection? It's not even a word.

Aside from that clit or dick deflating word, I loved the whole story. I don't mind so much if the body reacts to the rape, although It turns me on more when the woman gets nothing from it at all, but I liked it never the less. May have been more realistic for me if you had said he lifted her off the ground when he fucked her against the wall, because the height difference made it seem awkward to almost impossible. He seemed strong enough, and that would have turned me on too much. I still like it though. One of my favourite, aside Tha taking of Lena, Chapter 1-3. I'd love to see a part two to Eric's fuck antics. Maybe with a new, younger nurse or same one, and maybe not so much enjoyment from the woman. I'll be checking back for the sequel. Well done. Great writing, but please stop using that stupid word- Nooosa! It's really stupid and annoying. If it's a personal thing, then some things should be left at that, personal!

I looked it up, and nossa is a south american slang that roughly translates to something like oh god.

Absolute garbage

Nice read and it will be interesting to see if Sarah takes a stand and report the rape even with the lies Kim will say to support Eric. I'm hoping Sarah gets revenge big time. She seems to have problems with men taking advantage of her in ALL of your stories. Pay back is a mother????!!!!!!! Surprise us, humm!!!!

A bit unbelievable, but still great.

So tired of reading stories with dumb descriptions like "his 9 inch cock" and "he pushed through her cervix and entered her womb", not to mention the misspellings. Its "bowels" not "bowls". Get an editor, and make the story realistic.

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Why she says Nossa?