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by jthserra11/26/05

Ah, wonderful economy of words

here you present the bare essentials, making a powerful statement in just a few words. You'll want to fix the typo on "the" in the second to last line. All in all, a short, powerful poem.

jim : )

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by jthserra11/26/05

Hi

this poem is mentioned in the New Poem Review Thread:

http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/show thread.php?p=15098747&posted=1#post15098747

jim : )

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by LeBroz11/27/05

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Sweet and to the point...

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by cward211/27/05

Brevity

can be a wonderful thing in poetry as you've proved here. Simple but well written poem. Great stuff

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by 11/27/05

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Short but outstanding job!

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