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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz11/27/05

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Excellent imagery;
a tale of two jungles
and fierce battles
to survive.

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by cward211/27/05

Excellent

Great emotional write. Well done!

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by Bill Dada11/27/05

Damn this is good

The whole thing was so powerful, but these lines:
'anxious to have
my hunger stolen from me
as I roar with the pain
of where I have been'
knocked me on my ass.
ty,bd

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by Anonymous11/27/05

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Oh, great ending, and I really liked the first stanza. Write on, clever one!

sal

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by dcpoet4411/27/05

last stanza.....

packs it for me too. overall a nice write.....don

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by oregon_gal11/28/05

Great first line!!!

loved it!

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