You need to indicate time better. Fiance or husband? It took rereading to figure out that you were talking about years difference, that you WERE fiance when you got rich years back, but now you are married. similarly alex & katie.
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You need to segue time better
You need to indicate time better. Fiance or husband? It took rereading to figure out that you were talking about years difference, that you WERE fiance when you got rich years back, but now you are married. similarly alex & katie.
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