Most readers, I suspect, will enjoy this story and then quickly forget about it once they've started another. If they would take the time to appreciate your choice of words and discover the humor that lays beneath them they will enjoy it all the more.
Thanks for a really GOOD read. You're quite a writer and I'm anxious to read parts 1 and 2 plus 4 and anything else you have written before or write in the future.
Granted, this is a very nice stroke story that did exactly what the author said she wanted it to do in her bio. I had not found it particulary funny, but it is 5 below zero (F) today in Minnesota, so maybe I am a bit grumpy. But I am looking forward to chapter 4, and I hope Milissa gets to do more than just watch.
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Sexy and Funny
Most readers, I suspect, will enjoy this story and then quickly forget about it once they've started another. If they would take the time to appreciate your choice of words and discover the humor that lays beneath them they will enjoy it all the more.
Thanks for a really GOOD read. You're quite a writer and I'm anxious to read parts 1 and 2 plus 4 and anything else you have written before or write in the future.
Stroking more than laughing
Granted, this is a very nice stroke story that did exactly what the author said she wanted it to do in her bio. I had not found it particulary funny, but it is 5 below zero (F) today in Minnesota, so maybe I am a bit grumpy. But I am looking forward to chapter 4, and I hope Milissa gets to do more than just watch.
Literate and hot
Literate, and very hot. The characters felt like flesh and blood, funny and humane.
And the fucking, of course, was right on the money.
Very nice!!
Katthrynn,
This was so hot I came all over myself! I can't wait for the next installment.
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