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Resident Evil 4 Ch. 01

byWilliamMandrake©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/11/05

Spell Checker Please

Had good content, but the spelling was that of 4th graders. You need to get an editor and try using the spell checker for the first time.

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by Anonymous05/12/06

creative

very creative. loved it.

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by Anonymous07/27/07

middle school grammer

apart from all the grammar mistakes of plural and singular terms its content was good i liked it but with the grammar mistakes it doesint really flow right

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by Anonymous08/06/07

Grammar Makes it unreadable

It's hard to get into a story when the grammar is bad. It takes people out of the scene.

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by Anonymous05/29/09

Ignorance

This is awful the so called writer needs English class, And try spell check this was of ignorance I couldn't get into such ignorance I'm A writer and This was what you call....Dumb.

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by Anonymous06/28/09

Orthography

Your orthography note 5

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by rere1611/26/10

hmm

wow my bro just defeated the game and i always wondered what happened to ashely when she got trapped. story was interesting and kind of sick at the same time but i liked it

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by Anonymous12/24/11

Wheres the other story?

I remember there was another resident evil 4 story on here that was really high quality, it was multiple chapters, dealt with multiple characters and pairings, and went into really fine detail about the game. There was even a chapter that had luis and ada hooking up. anyone have any idea what happened to that story or where i can find it?

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by Anonymous12/28/11

re: where's the other story?

yeah anon it was resident evil uncut im pretty sure it had
6? chapters
was in the celebrities section
and was written an author with "jackal" in his username
and i have searched high and low and i cannot fucking find it

CAN SOMEONE PLEASE FIND RESIDENT EVIL UNCUT (THE LITEROTICA SERIES)?!

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by Anonymous01/08/17

This story is....

incredibly bad.
Example: 'a dig that is more than 8 inch.' What the hell? I think you mean dick.
Please learn to write and then maybe, your next story will make a lot of sense.

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