All Comments on 'Breathless'

by Lily_Wretched

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very erotic

Very exciting.... could feel myself doing it to my slave as I read the story.......hard as a ROCK!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A Little Air here please

Why did you stop?, she was still alive.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Oh good GODS

That was... enthralling. So hot. I got soaked just reading it, hoping for something similar to happen to me. That was incredible.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Please write more

I have to admit I wish it was him doing it to her but this was still sex and hot. I wish you'd write more. This is a big fantasy of mine

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
And you wonder?

Why people end up dead in the E.R.? They play stupid games. And write even dumber stories about them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Fantastic

I loved this story, shame the victim didn't get a few more smokey breaths first!

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