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A Perfect World Pt. 02

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by jasliz12/05/05

Very nice

Pt. 1 was a little slow but I'm very glad I read part 2. Very hot and sexy, the build up was perfect and you left the reader hanging like a comic book waiting for the next months issue, very nice. Can't wait for more.

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