I would not choose suicide for a character, but this is a kind of revenge, I think. Suicide is someone afraid of the future. Whatever happens, we should welcome the future.
Read it again. Also re-read my previous comments. All involved in this tale were losers. First is Harry, who started cheating as soon as he was on the road on business. Then the wife for exacting her personal revenge by screwing his friend's, and her sisters husband. He for just being a cheating prick and his wife for staying. Shit, too much thinking for me. Bottom line, the original loser is a coward who killed himself and the rest will just suffer in anguish and pain. Good night.
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Anonymous11/17/16
WGAT A GUTLESS TWAT
TOOK THE COWARDS WAY OUT,,,,ONLY THING IS THEY WERE ALL WELL RID OF HIM
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Good Ending Idea
I would not choose suicide for a character, but this is a kind of revenge, I think. Suicide is someone afraid of the future. Whatever happens, we should welcome the future.
I THINK HE SHOULD HAVE USED 3 BULLETS
instead of 1 and then feel sorrow for Betty. TK U MLJ LV NV
He took the coward's way out...
He couldn't deal with the embarrassment of his family and friends and committed suicide - that's never a solution!
Idiot
Well I don't really feel sorry for the idiot and what a baby to kill himself.
Damn
Read it again. Also re-read my previous comments. All involved in this tale were losers. First is Harry, who started cheating as soon as he was on the road on business. Then the wife for exacting her personal revenge by screwing his friend's, and her sisters husband. He for just being a cheating prick and his wife for staying. Shit, too much thinking for me. Bottom line, the original loser is a coward who killed himself and the rest will just suffer in anguish and pain. Good night.
WGAT A GUTLESS TWAT
TOOK THE COWARDS WAY OUT,,,,ONLY THING IS THEY WERE ALL WELL RID OF HIM
I think the title should have been
"A Double Action Standard"
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