All Comments on 'Wife Is Blackmailed'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hot

Looking forward to Chapter 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
not complete

Good but left me flat. Should have fucked her and cumed in her. Keep writing.

thekiwicharmerthekiwicharmerover 18 years ago
Very Hot

Now that you have her where you want her horny and wet, hope that the next chapter is on its way very soon?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Don't stop there!

You did such a good job with your story you should finish it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
More Please!

Wonderful - please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very good 1st chapter

The progression of this chapter seemed very natural. One of the better written stories I've seen here. Please continue writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Fuck the slut

Give the slut a good fucking. Maybe bring a few friends over for a gang bang. Should make for some great photos.

don87654don87654about 18 years ago
A good start

I am looking forward to Chapter/Part 2.....Very erotic!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
nice

she cheats on her husband, even though she is shy and conservative, so I think she will enjoy her new lover and let him do anything her pleases.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Wow!

Really well written and moves at just the right pace. Really looking forward to more! Left me aroused to the point of not going backward.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Bullshit

WOW! HOT! MORE! DON'T STOP THERE! VERY HOT! FUCK THE SLUT! VERY GOOD START! NICE!

There are a lot of sick motherfuckers that read these piss-poor stories.

oldwinooldwinoover 17 years ago
great fast start

Will written hot start. Hope this is the start of a very long nasty humiliation series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Fantastic

Great subject. Great description. I can not wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Kinda lame 4.6 stars?

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ramonbrookramonbrookabout 11 years ago
Slow but ......

Very well written with the build up! Very much looking forward to reading the next chapter!

CindykayCindykayover 10 years ago
very erotic

I know something about situations such as this and it seems to evoke the same effect on me as with Mary

TheRiseFromAshesTheRiseFromAshesover 9 years ago
Great Start!

I love the start of this story. I love the premise of it too. I'll be reading more for sure. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
What a Shame

It doesn't look like the author continued the story. That's too bad, his writing is above average and the plot has so many possibilities.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
woman self betrayed

Well written, good scenario, but as with almost all non-consent stories, the writer must feel it is necessary to have the woman "get wet", feel her body betray herself' or the worse, not in this story, have an orgasm while being raped; more tears, please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Has Some Potential

But there is a big time gap in this little story....Jeff arrives first thing in the morning just after the kids have left for school....he shows Mary the pictures....gets a blowjob and then has to leave because the kids will be home from school soon....WHAT....did Mary give Jeff a 5 to 6 hour blowjob? It just doesn't make sense!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very badly written. Ever few sentences the viewpoint switches. You cannot write like that for one cannot read like that. Keep your viewpoint.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Blackmailers, date-rapists and molesters all belong in a wood chipper.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Mary play your cards right and turn the table on this little punk

have you fucked him yet

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