by hotwife2k
Good but left me flat. Should have fucked her and cumed in her. Keep writing.
Now that you have her where you want her horny and wet, hope that the next chapter is on its way very soon?
You did such a good job with your story you should finish it.
The progression of this chapter seemed very natural. One of the better written stories I've seen here. Please continue writing!
Give the slut a good fucking. Maybe bring a few friends over for a gang bang. Should make for some great photos.
she cheats on her husband, even though she is shy and conservative, so I think she will enjoy her new lover and let him do anything her pleases.
Really well written and moves at just the right pace. Really looking forward to more! Left me aroused to the point of not going backward.
WOW! HOT! MORE! DON'T STOP THERE! VERY HOT! FUCK THE SLUT! VERY GOOD START! NICE!
There are a lot of sick motherfuckers that read these piss-poor stories.
Will written hot start. Hope this is the start of a very long nasty humiliation series.
Very well written with the build up! Very much looking forward to reading the next chapter!
I know something about situations such as this and it seems to evoke the same effect on me as with Mary
I love the start of this story. I love the premise of it too. I'll be reading more for sure. 5*
It doesn't look like the author continued the story. That's too bad, his writing is above average and the plot has so many possibilities.
Well written, good scenario, but as with almost all non-consent stories, the writer must feel it is necessary to have the woman "get wet", feel her body betray herself' or the worse, not in this story, have an orgasm while being raped; more tears, please
But there is a big time gap in this little story....Jeff arrives first thing in the morning just after the kids have left for school....he shows Mary the pictures....gets a blowjob and then has to leave because the kids will be home from school soon....WHAT....did Mary give Jeff a 5 to 6 hour blowjob? It just doesn't make sense!
Very badly written. Ever few sentences the viewpoint switches. You cannot write like that for one cannot read like that. Keep your viewpoint.
Mary play your cards right and turn the table on this little punk
have you fucked him yet