This is a first for me with one of your stories. Either I really hate them, or I really like them. This is one that for the first time made sit on the fence and I couldn't make up my mind one way or the other.
Well I did and didn't like the story. But it was a good read.
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Anonymous12/04/05
you hate women
your stories tell your hate for women.in all your stories there is need for mental health specialist.
Two stories with husbands that have backbones? Two stories that don't have husbands beating off to the thought of their wives cheating on them? Once again, I have to thank you for the effort you took in writing this story.
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Anonymous12/04/05
Can't Quite Get There Huh Bobbie
This time when the sanity went away it was almost 3/4 of the way into the story when he had his boss fuck his whore wife - then down into unrealityville with stupid sick attempts at erotic or sensual pictures.
Lets think about it - he makes her fuck lotsa cock to get even with her so he can't kick her out and not get any puzzy himself - and stays pissed at her for what she did and what he makes her do and -------does this seem like a bloody fuck circle or what Bobbie - splain it please so I don't think you have lost it????
Sad and Puzzling or is it just consistantly weird Bobbie
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Anonymous12/04/05
Bullshit
Bob, you are a sick motherfucker. Just like the assholes that like this shit.
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Anonymous12/04/05
Just Plain Stupid
Just Plain Bob, you're just plain grasping for story lines. This offering was just plain stupid and evidence of you not being in touch with reality ... not even close to anything like reality. Get help and stop writing until you do. You're have a truly ill mind.
One of those guy she is fucking with your assistance needs to knock her up.
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Anonymous12/04/05
A Nice Fantasy...
but not very erotic. As a revenge story it is unrealistic because all she had to do is get him on tape coercing her into these acts. I do not know why he is not in jail because the husband is usually who they go after on these type of assaults. Why didn't they go after him for beating them up? After six months of being a whore she is too dumb to figure out that he will never take her back.
Basically, a nice male fantasy!
SleeplessinMD
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Anonymous12/04/05
I've got to agree
This is unbelievable. Why would he consider keeping a public convience in his house sheltered under his name? In the newar future he will be spending money for AIDS treatment plus at least one of the uncureable STD strains.
His brother needs to be told of Ann's complicity in his "wife's" sexual history including the night she stayed for a gangbang. Ann is probably getting action on her own.
Fred needs to cut his losses and put his "beloved wife" out on the streets where she belongs. A little more backbone for Fred please.
One seldom finds an author who has a character commit criminal acts - and pimping out one's wife is criminal - with no sense of wrongdoing. I suspect this reflects the author's own lack of insight as to what is, and is not, permissible in this society
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Anonymous12/04/05
Love the Criminal Acts
Why? Because the story is FICTION. The story was interesting, different, fun in a perverse way. Since Bess was carrying on with the 3 guys way past that first incident----and that long-lasting gangbang affair is absurd in real life---it is only natural that Fred did a little knee dislocations.
Great job, as long as the Husband doesn't weaken and actually places his cock into that walking lab culture!
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Anonymous08/23/06
Nasty!
The wife was a ho, but hubby's behaviour by far surpassed hers! He should have charged for pimping her out...
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Anonymous11/25/06
betrayal is a bitch
who knows what a person would do if betrayed.some are weak and do nothing,but there is a few who you don't fuck with.this was one of the few times they ask for what they got.ladies and gentlemen you can read and enjoy a whore of a wife fuck over her hubby and that alright.but when a husband gets revenge,he a bad person or that to rough.i got two words for you fuck you.
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Anonymous11/25/06
Perfect revenge on the whore!
Too bad this author does not write more "non-wimp" husband stories on a more frequent basis.
by
Anonymous05/01/07
whore or slut
Only problem with this story is the terminology...his wife was a slut not a whore...whores charge for it and she gives it up for free.
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Anonymous06/21/07
Agree
she is a slut, not a whore.
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Anonymous01/02/08
ABSOFUCKINGLUTELY GREAT ! ! !
In addition to working over the knees of the three strippers, he should have added one more lick with the bat...right to the nose of each one...as hard as he could swing...Thanks.
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Anonymous01/10/08
she is ok w status quo
she continues to service the men he brings and says she is sorry. a cynic would say that she doth protest too much, where she smiles with each new guy. it works out, husband has no other expectations for her and he did not fold and found a solution that works for him.
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Anonymous01/25/09
tenacity
she understands the things to do to 'fix' things, and is apparently enjoying the process. a punishment she can get into. put an end to the charade
by
Anonymous01/25/09
This is the way to handle a slut wife issue!
One of the few JPB non-wimp stories - so enjoy!
by
Anonymous08/05/09
No Class Slut
I think she went with the three guys willingly too and probably a little drunk, helps make the decision to cheat a little easier.
Getting home and realizing she can be forgiven, the true slut emerges and now sober disrespect for her husband.
After making her a whore for his friends and clients, he should take her out, dressed cheap, for dinner, slip her a little ecstacy and leave her in an interracial club where he has a detective and cameras ready. It's hard to divorce someone you really loved but you can't live with a disrespecting slut that just fucks you over. It'll always hurt but she has to go. Years of love and trust gone but, this is who she really was, he shouldn't have to pay to keep her in her desired lifestyle!
First the following is false: "As drunk as she was the rape charge would never stick." Bottom line, if a girl is intoxicated she cannot consent to sex and the guys could be charged with rape. It does not matter whether they knew she was intoxicated, it doesn’t matter if they were intoxicated too, all that matters is that she was not in a state of mind to consent and therefore it is rape. If a guy gets a girl drunk or high and then “gets together” with her he has committed a sexual assault. Again, it doesn’t matter if he is drunk or high as well. The guy's diminished abilities do not negate his responsibilities.
Second, he could not attack three men, send them to the hospital, and not go to prison. Especially since all three fucked his wife, he had them fired, and had the report from the detective agency. In a court of law that is proof beyond a reasonable doubt and that is how the judge would instruct the jury. Even is he could prove he was somewhere else, he would be convicted of conspiracy. Even if, against all odd, he wasn't convicted, all three would sue him for millions of dollars with the much lower standard of just a weighing of the evidence they would win and he would be forever broke and allowed to keep no more than 25% of his wages.
Finally, no husband is going to have his wife fuck men unless it is for money and he is her pimp. Furthermore, she would refuse and divorce his ass, collect alimony and at least half the assets.
The story is impossible on so many issues, it deserves the lowest rating.
OK, this story is really fucked up. One thing might have made it a little better. I cannot understand all of the authors who write crap like this and never have the husband ask the burning questions. I am not saying that the answers would have had any bearing on the events, but damn, wouldn't inquiring minds want to know. Did she leave from the party willingly or was she in fact too drunk to know what was happening? If willingly, was that the first time? If not, why the affairs? If she loved her husband, why cut him off? The story would have been marginally better if these questions had been asked and answered. Not doing that make me think the author was just being lazy. Come on JPB, you can do better.
English
Well Bob............................
This is a first for me with one of your stories. Either I really hate them, or I really like them. This is one that for the first time made sit on the fence and I couldn't make up my mind one way or the other.
Well I did and didn't like the story. But it was a good read.
you hate women
your stories tell your hate for women.in all your stories there is need for mental health specialist.
Oh my God, two of them?
Two stories with husbands that have backbones? Two stories that don't have husbands beating off to the thought of their wives cheating on them? Once again, I have to thank you for the effort you took in writing this story.
Can't Quite Get There Huh Bobbie
This time when the sanity went away it was almost 3/4 of the way into the story when he had his boss fuck his whore wife - then down into unrealityville with stupid sick attempts at erotic or sensual pictures.
Lets think about it - he makes her fuck lotsa cock to get even with her so he can't kick her out and not get any puzzy himself - and stays pissed at her for what she did and what he makes her do and -------does this seem like a bloody fuck circle or what Bobbie - splain it please so I don't think you have lost it????
Sad and Puzzling or is it just consistantly weird Bobbie
Bullshit
Bob, you are a sick motherfucker. Just like the assholes that like this shit.
Just Plain Stupid
Just Plain Bob, you're just plain grasping for story lines. This offering was just plain stupid and evidence of you not being in touch with reality ... not even close to anything like reality. Get help and stop writing until you do. You're have a truly ill mind.
Were you drunk?
You had to have been drunk to come up with a story like that. So unreal, so disbelievable, so sick.
A good start
One of those guy she is fucking with your assistance needs to knock her up.
A Nice Fantasy...
but not very erotic. As a revenge story it is unrealistic because all she had to do is get him on tape coercing her into these acts. I do not know why he is not in jail because the husband is usually who they go after on these type of assaults. Why didn't they go after him for beating them up? After six months of being a whore she is too dumb to figure out that he will never take her back.
Basically, a nice male fantasy!
SleeplessinMD
I've got to agree
This is unbelievable. Why would he consider keeping a public convience in his house sheltered under his name? In the newar future he will be spending money for AIDS treatment plus at least one of the uncureable STD strains.
His brother needs to be told of Ann's complicity in his "wife's" sexual history including the night she stayed for a gangbang. Ann is probably getting action on her own.
Fred needs to cut his losses and put his "beloved wife" out on the streets where she belongs. A little more backbone for Fred please.
Fred the Pimp
One seldom finds an author who has a character commit criminal acts - and pimping out one's wife is criminal - with no sense of wrongdoing. I suspect this reflects the author's own lack of insight as to what is, and is not, permissible in this society
Love the Criminal Acts
Why? Because the story is FICTION. The story was interesting, different, fun in a perverse way. Since Bess was carrying on with the 3 guys way past that first incident----and that long-lasting gangbang affair is absurd in real life---it is only natural that Fred did a little knee dislocations.
Good one Bob!
You shouldn't get any complaints. If readers don't know your themes they never will.
dg
Horrible
Not sure how somethinglike this even comes close to erotic. Quite the opposite.
Easy enough to understand
Nothing fancy or deep here. It is however, a little more interesting than your usual offering
WOW!!!
Bob, just one word to say to you about this story........(FANTASTIC)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
Paul
good
nice story Bob
sick
this is the worst thing you have ever done sham on you
One of your best, JPB!
Great job, as long as the Husband doesn't weaken and actually places his cock into that walking lab culture!
One of your best, JPB!
Great job, as long as the Husband doesn't weaken and actually places his cock into that walking lab culture!
Nasty!
The wife was a ho, but hubby's behaviour by far surpassed hers! He should have charged for pimping her out...
betrayal is a bitch
who knows what a person would do if betrayed.some are weak and do nothing,but there is a few who you don't fuck with.this was one of the few times they ask for what they got.ladies and gentlemen you can read and enjoy a whore of a wife fuck over her hubby and that alright.but when a husband gets revenge,he a bad person or that to rough.i got two words for you fuck you.
Perfect revenge on the whore!
Too bad this author does not write more "non-wimp" husband stories on a more frequent basis.
whore or slut
Only problem with this story is the terminology...his wife was a slut not a whore...whores charge for it and she gives it up for free.
Agree
she is a slut, not a whore.
ABSOFUCKINGLUTELY GREAT ! ! !
In addition to working over the knees of the three strippers, he should have added one more lick with the bat...right to the nose of each one...as hard as he could swing...Thanks.
she is ok w status quo
she continues to service the men he brings and says she is sorry. a cynic would say that she doth protest too much, where she smiles with each new guy. it works out, husband has no other expectations for her and he did not fold and found a solution that works for him.
tenacity
she understands the things to do to 'fix' things, and is apparently enjoying the process. a punishment she can get into. put an end to the charade
This is the way to handle a slut wife issue!
One of the few JPB non-wimp stories - so enjoy!
No Class Slut
I think she went with the three guys willingly too and probably a little drunk, helps make the decision to cheat a little easier.
Getting home and realizing she can be forgiven, the true slut emerges and now sober disrespect for her husband.
After making her a whore for his friends and clients, he should take her out, dressed cheap, for dinner, slip her a little ecstacy and leave her in an interracial club where he has a detective and cameras ready. It's hard to divorce someone you really loved but you can't live with a disrespecting slut that just fucks you over. It'll always hurt but she has to go. Years of love and trust gone but, this is who she really was, he shouldn't have to pay to keep her in her desired lifestyle!
Typical JPB excellence in writing.
Thoroughly enjoyable.
Now that's what I call using the situation that's handed to you.
A good story, why kick the slut to the curb when he can help his business with pimping her out, after all she's just a whore a heart.
Thanks Bob, it's a good read
I rated it 1*.
First the following is false: "As drunk as she was the rape charge would never stick." Bottom line, if a girl is intoxicated she cannot consent to sex and the guys could be charged with rape. It does not matter whether they knew she was intoxicated, it doesn’t matter if they were intoxicated too, all that matters is that she was not in a state of mind to consent and therefore it is rape. If a guy gets a girl drunk or high and then “gets together” with her he has committed a sexual assault. Again, it doesn’t matter if he is drunk or high as well. The guy's diminished abilities do not negate his responsibilities.
Second, he could not attack three men, send them to the hospital, and not go to prison. Especially since all three fucked his wife, he had them fired, and had the report from the detective agency. In a court of law that is proof beyond a reasonable doubt and that is how the judge would instruct the jury. Even is he could prove he was somewhere else, he would be convicted of conspiracy. Even if, against all odd, he wasn't convicted, all three would sue him for millions of dollars with the much lower standard of just a weighing of the evidence they would win and he would be forever broke and allowed to keep no more than 25% of his wages.
Finally, no husband is going to have his wife fuck men unless it is for money and he is her pimp. Furthermore, she would refuse and divorce his ass, collect alimony and at least half the assets.
The story is impossible on so many issues, it deserves the lowest rating.
Not So Good
OK, this story is really fucked up. One thing might have made it a little better. I cannot understand all of the authors who write crap like this and never have the husband ask the burning questions. I am not saying that the answers would have had any bearing on the events, but damn, wouldn't inquiring minds want to know. Did she leave from the party willingly or was she in fact too drunk to know what was happening? If willingly, was that the first time? If not, why the affairs? If she loved her husband, why cut him off? The story would have been marginally better if these questions had been asked and answered. Not doing that make me think the author was just being lazy. Come on JPB, you can do better.
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