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Great Best revenge story,
This was one great story, I liked it too much, I think I would have done the same, they went too far for a man to sit after that, I loved the revenge. But I would have loved to see more dialouge exchange between Angie and Rob, I missed Angie talking in Part2, IF I were ther I would like to listen her, what she wante to say, put her in condition where she can show me how much she loved Rob, give her chance to show(but dont buy her bullshit) like "you have two choices, if you can go through this for one day, I will forgive you and take back, but steve will have to go, OR we can divorce and I will free you now, but steve will have to go through one whole day, through this, if he survive his luck, other wise you can live decent life after that." Of course he did not have to take her back, but it would serve her right, knowing that her love means nothing to him now, but she would know, what it woould be like, because she choose pain for him because she thought she loved him, and now he chose pain for her to see how much she loved him.
And after one complete day if she survives he would divorce her, because divorcing will only ease their pain, there is no getting together, if she choose life, he could let her be there for one more day, and then, set them free they had nothing to prove steve did this to them, so he can fly out, or leaving them to death will aslso be fair.
Um
How did both of them tie themselves to bondage boards at the same time?
Mind you, HE doesn't care but still.
Very dark for you Bob. I liked the second part better then the first.
Uh, FD45...
I seem to recall the mention of handcuffs being used. You can handcuff yourself to an object. I think there's more than one story on here that uses that gimmick
More than one way to skin a cat
I'd have melted them down to paste in a tub of lye one limb at a time then dumped their remains in a storm drain, but your way works too.
BI SEXUAL, BI PARTISAN
equal opportunity cheaters. TK U MLJ LV NV
whose the author?
Since this story has revenge...good revenge in it where the man actually behaves like a man and not a wimp, i wonder who the author is... because JPB usually ensures that the men in his stories arent men but world champions in being wimps... Anyways i loved this story 5 star rating from me.
That was pretty good,
although the hardest part of beeing buttfucked is the humiliation (not to mention the betrayal in this case), so getting a machine to do the job is hardly the same. I guess that they will not survive, and especially that she will be alone, watching his dead body being fucked for ours after his light went out, is a pretty good equalizer.
Other possibilities like selling them to a bordell in mexico are not really practical because other people would have to be involved and also i doubt they want steve there, but then again maybe he has a cute ass, lol.
All of you cucks who think it was to violent, think again. For a real man some kinds of betrayal require blood. End of story.
OUCH!
That would be the appropriate comment.
Gee, this is pretty bad.
What's even worse is that it got a 4.51 average rating. Revenge is one thing but torture murder is another. It's scary enough that you wrote the story, but scarier that so many readers rated it so highly.
ouch
I can see a rape victim doing this to his/her attackers.
Rape messed up his mind and drove him insane.
Fitting
This certainly made up for the absolutely disgusting first chapter.
i'd comment but. . .
it might incriminate me.
BTB & Revenge
This is an ingenious way to get revenge on them both. An eye for an eye, as it were. They earned it.
C'mon people, think. This is fantasy, not our real world. I'll admit that it takes a delightfully kinky mind to plot this out, but I doubt that it will ever happen in real life. The acts for which he took revenge? Yes, they happen every day. The revenge he took? Will never happen.
I felt sorrow for the poor guy in the first part, but I was cheering him on in the last part. Bob, you do write interesting and fun stuff.
One minor thought: If I'd set it up, there would be a way to drip just a little lubricant on the dildos, "to lengthen and enhance the experience".
What the fuck is wrong with all the pussies that say that this was over the top.
Get a grip people this was a master class in payback. I would love to see the condition of Angie and her fuck buddy about a week after the machines were set in motion.
In so many of the stories on this site some poor schmuck gets fucked over by the wife and her co conspirator and just lays down and takes it.
Now said poor schmuck turns the tables and fucks up said whore wife and her co conspirator.
Good should happen more often.
Bob I love this tale and would give it 500 if I could.
Well done!!!
a master class in being a psychopath
Murder is always, always wrong. As well written as any of JPBs stories, but very dark. I know that this is Bob exploring the depths of revenge, but it is disconcerting that many of the denizens of Mom's basement think that this is an appropriate response in real life.
LOL
Awesome story.. revenge at its best.
Super Fantastic! Five Stars!
You followed your worst story ever with your very best! Great save!
BLOODY HELL MATE
NEVER PISS YOU OFF! FUCK ME W.T.F. B.T.B. Fuuuuuck mee man! You got a 2for! What can you say LIVE BY THE COCK, DIE BY THE COCK . LOVE YOU ALL! BYE! OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.
Damn
Now thats revenge. Fucked to death by a machine. Way to go. Never even crossed my mind. I don't want you md at me.
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