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AWESOME
I am glad that you didn't leave it the way it was. I hated they way you had left it, but i am glad that you decided to write another chapter. This is just fucking awesome. They say that there is nothing worse than a woman scorned. I think they are wrong. What is worse you ask, a vindictive SOB. I hope that you decide to write another chapter on the others were the wife gets away with cheating.I really like your ending. Great story. Thanks
I honestly didn't think you had it in you.
A revenge story for what was probably the most disgusting story that most males have ever read. Thank you for the effort.
Who are you and what happened to Just Plain Bob?
This was a fantastic story! Just Plain Bob normally writes creampie crap stories!
LOL!!
Bob, normally I just hate dark stories. And I even admit that I had to skip over parts of Part 1 because that wasn't my cup of tea. I mean I just hated part one. But part 2 was such a revenge story it made all others kinda pale in comparison.
Part 2 was way better than Part 1.
look what you have gone and done
got people talking good about your writings.tell the truth,feels good don't it.
Wow. A fate worse than Death that is death
You have done good. Usually revenge seems too vicious but this actually seems justified
Great
Good revenge story,I'm impressed.
Excellent revenge story
Most innovative form of revenge I've read about lately. Top marks!
Your Driving Licence Please
Oh man - I'm in shock - it's my heart - air - need air - some water - no scotch would be better - wait a minute - who really is this masked MAN.
The one with respect rolling off him from us and to himself - I know and you know this was a long time coming - lets not let it be the blind pig trick eh!
Thanks Author - with some Respect and Regard
PS - As one comment noted you have more fodder to conclude if you can and want to?
Whoooweee
This was way over the top. I'm sorry I cannot rate this story a '6'. You pushed every button in this revenge tale. The outcome while dastardly cruel actually fits the crime. I'm ashamed to say I enjoyed this.
1000%
I totally enjoy each and everyone of your stories but this is the best you have ever written.
Yuck!
Okay, the guy didn't deserve being gang raped by his wife's lover and his gang. But leaving them both to die, escalated the revenge far worse. The worst that happened to him was humiliation, but he is leaving the others for dead and that makes him the real sicko.
Good Story
Nice change of pace. Loved the way you were able to come up with something to balance out the first story. It is a little over the top, or is it? Thanks for a good read.
You're the best.
I tried to vote a "10" but, alas, the machine wouldn't take it. Thanks for giving guys something to hope for: respect. Phil
BTW - I read and like all your stories. That doesn't mean I'd want to live 'em out but they're fun reads. Please keep writing.
Voted a 15
LOVE IT!!! I voted 5 three times for a score of 15. Hope the site will accept it! I really, really, really hope they both "RELAX and ENJOYED" it as much as he did!!!
FINALLY
AT LAST AN AUTHER FINALLY UNDERSTANDS WHAT TEH PEOPEL WHO CREATED THIS WEBSITE MENT WHEN THEY CREATED TEH LOVING WIVES SECTION. WE NEED LOTS MORE STOREIS JUST LIEK THIS. THEY WERE GOING TO HELL ANYWAY, HE JUST HELPED THEM ALONG
Excellent Revenge Story!
Everybody got revenge - Steve got revenge for her watching his parties by seducing the wife, Angie got revenge for Rob wanting to leave her by arranging his rape and Rob got revenge on the two people who led to his rape by taking them out. A sad but well written story!
SleeplessinMD
It sounds fair to me
Personally I might have knee capped him, and busted his ankle, elbow, hand, shoulder and hip joints and left him alive for his next bi experience.
Teh wife needed a ittle more permanent remainder (on the off chance she survived).
A good ending
Very deserving. It is too bad you did not pee on both of them before you left them.
Pretty creative reprisal
His wife was pretty damn stupid. Steve was even stupider to believe that Bob would have let bygones be bygones. Be careful about accepting ANYTHING (food, drink, package) from someone that you have humiliated to that degree.
Anal rape is rarely about gratification, it's about power and/or humiliation. Ask any ex-convict.
I'm pretty sure that given the extent of the rage that Bob HAD to feel, he would have left some other physical damage on Stevie-Boy. Even if Angie and Steve were discovered (in time) by his butt buddies, they wouldn't have much fun with a partner who had to wear a colostomy bag for the rest of his life.
Outfuckingstanding Bob.
I'd have not bothered with using the machine on Angie's cunt, go straight to the brown growler on both of them. Oh yes, and one more thing, fuck the lube!!!!
OH YEAH
Paybacks a bitch. If that was me they'd have both suffered a whole lot more. What the hell's up with you people that think it was too much???
I'm speechless
I never knew you were going to add another chapter to this story. The first one was one of the few stories that I really detested, but man!!!!!!!!!! What a dark tale of revenge!!
Amazing
I have no idea why I liked the first one. I mean there was a guy being raped and his wife enjoying it and then at the end he just kinda let it slide. But this was just out there. I love the ending he had in store for Angie. Keep up the good work JPB
I ain't never seen a story like this
Bob:
You've found the perfect revenge to a cheating slut and her paramour. The only question I've got is this; Why did he stick it in her pussy instead of her ass? She needed to feel all of the "pleasure" she gave to her husband. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Thank You
I hoped for a sequel and got it and it was excellent.
outstanding...just rewards
its about time...there's a reason tempory insanity can be caimed in many states concerning cheating spouses. The ending to the first instalment left me cold , as did the second ending, however cold blooded revenge is a realistic outcome in a sitiuation as devoid of emotion as this one was.
Good
Good story Bob different from your ussual. I liked the ending... just hope someone finds her at least
Amazing
alk about a lovr/hate relationship. I'm talking about your stories.
I love this one but I'll probably hate the next one.
Thanks for being a great writer
Fantastic
That was one of the best endings out of any of your becoming a slut wife stories. It was well thought out and to me seemed almost totally justified.
Awesome
At long last one of them gets their just desserts...damn awesome ending ...perfect in everyway.
Well done
Rough
I'm usually not into endings like this, but I could see the pain that Rob went through driving him to this. I would like to see both Steve and Angie survive but without Rob being affected. This would be longer pain for them than the machine. Maybe Part 3? Still this was a great story and ending.
Bravo!
Justice is served! Well done
Bravo buddy
I would give my eye teeth to see you do that they had it coming to them by the way did those guys ever come to the house and find them ?
more please
I hope there`s more i want to see how it comes out when her whole world comes tumbling down on her and her lover
More punishment
I hope i read more into what happense to Angie and how much of a behind steve has left after 150 strokes .
Pat USA
another chapter
I loved to see Rob make steve suffer rob came out as the victor
Atlanta,Ga
Murder and rape are never justifiable
Sorry, Bob. I don't find tales of rape and murder interesting nor erotic. Why didn't the main character hop into the closet and whack off watching these two people die by fucking? It's what I would've expected to make the story complete.
If you thought this was a good tale, seek professional help at your earliest convenience because you need therapy.
For once, I agree with Alvaron
Rape and murder isn't justified. So when she raped hubby, she opened herself for all kinds of vengeance. Hubby didn't commit murder. "Steve" came for a fuck and got it.And remember that he was a Rapist also, so the same rules apply. Or did you conveniently forget who drew first blood?
Revenge
At last a real reaction to being screwed over.I heartily approve.
Retrubition
As it was meant to be, honey if you can't take the heat stay out of the fire. Might be that the only thing better would be to watch them both go. No way wuold anyone define what she did to rob as "love".
Retrubition
As it was meant to be, honey if you can't take the heat stay out of the fire. Might be that the only thing better would be to watch them both go. No way would anyone define what she did to rob as "love".
Great revenge story!
They both deserve the "full treatment" and then perish. Well done!
The man was rich, held blackmail data (potential t
(potential tapes, memory cards, pc etc. on dozens) Asshole's weath is still undeveloped thus, attainable. All this while the lovely couple are held hostage. But the MOST important suggestion I have is to please announce at the b eginning that this is a Snuff story so I can skip it? I've read some of your stories and enjoyed them. Now, I'm hesitant. But, hey, I'm just one vote, one voice.
very good
it has the components of retribution against them, very well. and they both lose in the end.
One more thing, Alvaron
Ever read "The Count of Monte Cristo"? Probably not. Judging by your posts, you're still trying to make love to yourself. That, too, was a dark revenge tale. The Ol' Desert God "Jehovah" was into revenge in a BIG way. Never read the Old Testament either? Pity for one who loves his own brilliance so much! You and only two other commenters (one, who by his own admission, ain't worth a "plug nickel") loved this story. Maybe YOU are the one who needs professional help!
Quite unlike you!
and I mean it in a good way...It's more like Scorpio's or Magmaman's style...Hey, as long as you put some thought into this revenge (and horror) fantasy (and you have) I am fine with it. Imagination you always had -plenty of it, so this story went very well by me.
The principle of dying by the vice you have indulged yourself in, is fully demonstrated - namely, the unending hunger for endless sex. So, says the man - you ask for it? You got it - endlessly!
HE HAS TEETH DOESN'T HE
WHY DIDN'T HE USE HIS TEETH WHEN HE HAD THE CHANCE?
WAS HE TOOTHLESS? DID HE LEAVE HIS DENTURES OUT?
WHY DIDN'T HE USE HIS TEETH????
An excellent job of revenge against people who
forcibly raped him and a wife that cheated in gangbangs committing adultry. Now the rapist and his girl can literally fuck themselves to death. Interesting how some folks can enjoy stories of men being humiliated or raped and women used as sex toys basically raped and whored out but cant take the revenge for those crimes.
One of your best. About half of your work is very good. The other half, well...
not so much. I would actually like a part 3 to see the outcome when they are found.
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