Wonderful capture of a single moment of stillness and caring. Well done Bel! Super.
Hope she knows it. ~Imp
A moment of waking ~
Of love and caring.
What I wouldn't give to have what you described...beautiful.
You captured a beautiful moment- great job.
A precious moment, preciously described.
All of the words that describe this poem have been taken! This is a lovely moment of perfect serenity. I like the perception that the two people have been together for a long time: his presuming her thoughts as if to feel what she feels and thinks. It reads like hot chocolate, warm and creamy.
That private intimate time ~ just before the woman you love wakes up ~ and gives you that first Good Morning kiss.
upon waking and reaching for more. TK U MLJ LV NV
Very sweet :)
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