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Christmas Promises Wrapped in Dreams

byNatalieRose©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/30/05

Beautiful!

Wow that was the most beautiful story I have ever read on here! Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

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by Anonymous12/01/05

wow

that was great... that actually reminded me of myself and my girlfriend, and with the descriptions, you practically had us to a t, it was like reading about myself. you know, other than the whole being a pilot thing.

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by Anonymous12/01/05

right on par with your usual...that's a good thing

this one is right up there with the others i've read of yours. excellent, as always. -Ryan

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by sack12/02/05

rather sweet.....

You write sex scenes well, they stole the show! Would have liked a stronger plot, unwrapping the Christmas gifts seems a little thin. Good luck in the contest!

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by MnRider12/03/05

Great detail

it is fun looking out of woman's mind, it's a chance to take a peek inside a place I don't normally get to see.

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by 12/04/05

Gotta love those toys

wrapped in rubber or not. Great job. I know the feeling of watching the clock and waiting. Good luck in the contest.

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by Anonymous12/14/05

Your Masturbation

Your writing is sooo sensual, especially when she masturbates. Personal experience, I assume. Mmmmmm. You must do it well, my dear!

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