All Comments on 'Christmas Promises Wrapped in Dreams'

Wow that was the most beautiful story I have ever read on here! Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

that was great... that actually reminded me of myself and my girlfriend, and with the descriptions, you practically had us to a t, it was like reading about myself. you know, other than the whole being a pilot thing.

this one is right up there with the others i've read of yours. excellent, as always. -Ryan

You write sex scenes well, they stole the show! Would have liked a stronger plot, unwrapping the Christmas gifts seems a little thin. Good luck in the contest!

it is fun looking out of woman's mind, it's a chance to take a peek inside a place I don't normally get to see.

wrapped in rubber or not. Great job. I know the feeling of watching the clock and waiting. Good luck in the contest.

Your writing is sooo sensual, especially when she masturbates. Personal experience, I assume. Mmmmmm. You must do it well, my dear!