kind of like a Summer Christmas of sorts, unusual to have a beach scene at that season. Good luck in the contest. (PS- I probably wouldn't have put the part in about the voting...may turn off some people)
Another wonderful and imaginative story! I would love to hear whether you've considered a second chapter where we get to find out more about Sam's adventures, living with her dad.
A very well written story. I absolutely loved it.
Better written than most. Keep up the good work. You have a real talent for writing.
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Anonymous12/05/05
PREGNANT !!!!!!!
I COMPLETELY LOVED YOUR TALE EXCEPT THE FACT THAT SHE MAY BE PREGNANT ; NOW WE HAVE TO HOPE THAT TIMING WAS IN THEIR FAVOUR . DID SHE WEAR PANTIES WITH THE DRESS WHEN THEY WENT OUT TO DINNER ?
Great story, very well written, classy tale.
Keep writing, please.
I know all those places you mention. Been to most of them, especially Haulover Beach,(the straight part)
And to all a good night. Read like it's your own story, and it was well written, with a build-up that was almost too long. I loved it. Keep going, I would like to read more about you and daddy.
Rudy
Great, great story! I would have liked more foreplay, reading about how much fun he had exploring the ripe tits he had dreamed about and her joy in sucking that big dick of his for the first time.
Such pain we spring on the loves of our life. Then to have the hurt kissed and made better. What a funny, sweet, terribly sexy story. Before she passed, my wife lived to love. "Love will conquer all." Damn...it even worked here...
I loved it. While incest doesn’t appeal to everybody, Sam and her daddy are old enough to make up their own minds. Their lives have certainly been fucked up enough so a little more can't harm! Keep going, I would like to read more, from the master, about Sam and her daddy.
Seasons Greetings from, Pete.
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Anonymous01/06/06
Outstanding
I think Sam "over-used" the word "Daddy".
But, other than that...,
OUTSTANDING!
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Anonymous02/17/06
I love dolphins and daughters
your story took off slow and then picked up the speed and tempo that kept me on the edge of my seat. I'd like to know more about Sam and Rod's lovemaking.......maybe another time? StarGlyderz
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Anonymous03/28/06
A nice christmas
I enjoyed reading your work in this tale. The length was about right. Of course many of us want mmore details about this and that. But it is your story
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Anonymous04/15/06
VERY VERY EROTIC...
I loved your story.. i was so excited while i was reading it .. i honestly didnt want the story to end.. I do hope you submit more stories about The Scouries..Thank you..
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Anonymous05/03/06
Very Enjoyable!
Looking forward to more tales from South Fla.
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Anonymous05/12/06
wow
this was an amazing story!!! thanks so much for the story about sam and her daddy, it made me so wet and happy. keep writing!!!!
=)
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Anonymous06/17/06
nice, but...
watch your grammar, and your misuses of "your" and "you're" sometimes distract from a good story. Good work, though!
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Anonymous08/27/06
It gave ma a woody
Well written, erotic, funny and romantic. I would like to read more so get with it.
I am generally opposed to the idea of incest. However, if there is an ideal situation for incest, this may be it. An adult daughter in a terrible marriage who has clearly loved her father since childhood is reconciled with him and gets her life vastly improved by the new relationship. Very sexy and loveing story.
Nookiehunter
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Anonymous10/14/06
dolphin sex
As a retired biological oceanographer I really enjoyed your story. Did you know that several years ago a Marine Biologist, by the name of Lilly, ran some experiments on a relationship between a male dolphin and a female aide. He wrote a book on it, but left out the actual sex. A Biologist friend of mine, and Llly's, filled me in on the details. Might make a good subject for a story. pkruse2000@highstream.net.
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Anonymous11/08/06
Spectacular
Mr. Scouries:
How to start? lol.... I have been reading literotica for about three years, this story of your is by far the most satisfying yet, I like how you spin a tale that requires some thought, not just "wham bam thank you mamam" lol
most storys are very thin. I guess thats okay sometimes a quick story will do, thanks for a great tale. I look forward in future for more such ingrossing submissions.
be well, be at peace and laugh often :-)
P.
Sethds2003@sbcglobal.net
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Anonymous11/10/06
Wow
I truely have to say this was a fabulous story! I totally love your play of words, and how you describe the ocean so well.Really the way you set the story, the scene and all, really allows you to feel like you are right there through the whole story, seeing it all play out before you.
Thank You Again! Hope to read more of your work soon!
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Anonymous12/23/06
FANFUCKINGTASTIC !!!!
TWICE !!!
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Anonymous01/27/07
excellent
ireally enjoyed you story it made me think of my daughter and how much i love her
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Anonymous01/27/07
Great Story
Great Story!!! I've read probably about 300 literotica stories in the past year and this is hands down the best I've come across. The only one I've left a comment, vote, or ANY sort of feedback on.
I loved this story it was so moving how she came to know of her love for her father. And that he never gave up on his little girl. Keep up the wonderful writing!
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Anonymous03/20/07
Good story! Developed a bit Slowly!
Need to set your hook a bit faster. I only kept reading because it is late here and I have insomnia. Liked the fact that there are few misspelled words and the grammar is good.
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Anonymous04/15/07
Great Story
Great story....started a bit slowly but ended well. I like the fact that you spell-checked the story. Hate reading stories with a lot of spelling and/or grammar errors.
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Anonymous08/22/07
Loved it
Great story, I like a story that actualy has a story line, yours did...good work.
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Anonymous09/17/07
Brought a Tear to my eyes
As I read your story, it reminded me of what has happened in my own life with my two daughters blaming me for leaving 10 years ago. I've had a secret passion for my oldest from the moment she was born. Not one of sex, but of pure love. Even today, neither of my daughters make an effort to see or spend time with me. I barely get an email from them. I wish my life would have such a happy ending to it with my daughters finally realizing just how much love I have for them. Great story... I'll enjoy reading more I'm sure.
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Anonymous10/03/07
Again well done
I am trying to read all of your stories, but lose track of the titles I have read. I sometimes click on one and then recognize it. I now realize I should vote again on it, otherwise it appears that someone didn't vote.
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Anonymous10/21/07
Deliscious
I absolutely loved it. I've been reading your stories over the past few weeks and find your style unmatched, your skill exceptional, and your stories HOT!
I hope you never loose your entheusiasm for writing and submitting your stories here. BRAVO (standing ovation)
English
unique situation....
kind of like a Summer Christmas of sorts, unusual to have a beach scene at that season. Good luck in the contest. (PS- I probably wouldn't have put the part in about the voting...may turn off some people)
Bravo
I liked it, You kept the story believable and lite-hearted at the same time. Good work writer.
Well done...
Well put together! A good read, nice tempo, great plot...
More, more... chuckle!
You told me you were
writing it but it was a surprise to see it today. Great job Jaime, like normal. Your writing is always such a welcome surprise.
Very interesting.
A great new twist on Father/Daughter sex. I love incestuous stories (never had and never will have an incestuous affair) and this is one of the best.
Yessssss
Another wonderful and imaginative story! I would love to hear whether you've considered a second chapter where we get to find out more about Sam's adventures, living with her dad.
A very well written story.
A very well written story. I absolutely loved it.
Better written than most. Keep up the good work. You have a real talent for writing.
PREGNANT !!!!!!!
I COMPLETELY LOVED YOUR TALE EXCEPT THE FACT THAT SHE MAY BE PREGNANT ; NOW WE HAVE TO HOPE THAT TIMING WAS IN THEIR FAVOUR . DID SHE WEAR PANTIES WITH THE DRESS WHEN THEY WENT OUT TO DINNER ?
Beautiful writing
Great story, very well written, classy tale.
Keep writing, please.
I know all those places you mention. Been to most of them, especially Haulover Beach,(the straight part)
Merry Christmas
And to all a good night. Read like it's your own story, and it was well written, with a build-up that was almost too long. I loved it. Keep going, I would like to read more about you and daddy.
Rudy
Another excellent erotic story!
You've done it again...with another great erotic tale. Thanks. I look forward to your next story.
very erotic! i loved it!
most impressive, now i will have to read all of your other stories. exceptionally well-written
EXCELENT
I hate to repeat what has already been said ,but it is hard to come up with anything else.
Great Story !!!!
Thank you and please write more soon.
What a great story!
I'm not sure that you could have improved on your story in any way. It was simply GREAT!
yes!
I LOVED IT!!!! and i'm all nice and wet...
More foreplay!
Great, great story! I would have liked more foreplay, reading about how much fun he had exploring the ripe tits he had dreamed about and her joy in sucking that big dick of his for the first time.
It's never too late
Such pain we spring on the loves of our life. Then to have the hurt kissed and made better. What a funny, sweet, terribly sexy story. Before she passed, my wife lived to love. "Love will conquer all." Damn...it even worked here...
WONDERFUL!
This is a wonderful, loving story. I absolutely loved it. Romance, love, pregnancy??, incest, what more could we expect of the Great Scouries?
Hope
I only hope to see A lot moor . This was avery good storie. Do you have moor pland .on this storie?? shure hope so.
Hope
I only hope to see A lot moor . This was avery good storie. Do you have moor pland .on this storie?? shure hope so.
wow
this was so hot! i'm so wet
Again superlative !
I loved it. While incest doesn’t appeal to everybody, Sam and her daddy are old enough to make up their own minds. Their lives have certainly been fucked up enough so a little more can't harm! Keep going, I would like to read more, from the master, about Sam and her daddy.
Seasons Greetings from, Pete.
Outstanding
I think Sam "over-used" the word "Daddy".
But, other than that...,
OUTSTANDING!
I love dolphins and daughters
your story took off slow and then picked up the speed and tempo that kept me on the edge of my seat. I'd like to know more about Sam and Rod's lovemaking.......maybe another time? StarGlyderz
A nice christmas
I enjoyed reading your work in this tale. The length was about right. Of course many of us want mmore details about this and that. But it is your story
VERY VERY EROTIC...
I loved your story.. i was so excited while i was reading it .. i honestly didnt want the story to end.. I do hope you submit more stories about The Scouries..Thank you..
Very Enjoyable!
Looking forward to more tales from South Fla.
wow
this was an amazing story!!! thanks so much for the story about sam and her daddy, it made me so wet and happy. keep writing!!!!
=)
nice, but...
watch your grammar, and your misuses of "your" and "you're" sometimes distract from a good story. Good work, though!
It gave ma a woody
Well written, erotic, funny and romantic. I would like to read more so get with it.
The Ideal Situation
I am generally opposed to the idea of incest. However, if there is an ideal situation for incest, this may be it. An adult daughter in a terrible marriage who has clearly loved her father since childhood is reconciled with him and gets her life vastly improved by the new relationship. Very sexy and loveing story.
Nookiehunter
dolphin sex
As a retired biological oceanographer I really enjoyed your story. Did you know that several years ago a Marine Biologist, by the name of Lilly, ran some experiments on a relationship between a male dolphin and a female aide. He wrote a book on it, but left out the actual sex. A Biologist friend of mine, and Llly's, filled me in on the details. Might make a good subject for a story. pkruse2000@highstream.net.
Spectacular
Mr. Scouries:
How to start? lol.... I have been reading literotica for about three years, this story of your is by far the most satisfying yet, I like how you spin a tale that requires some thought, not just "wham bam thank you mamam" lol
most storys are very thin. I guess thats okay sometimes a quick story will do, thanks for a great tale. I look forward in future for more such ingrossing submissions.
be well, be at peace and laugh often :-)
P.
Sethds2003@sbcglobal.net
Wow
I truely have to say this was a fabulous story! I totally love your play of words, and how you describe the ocean so well.Really the way you set the story, the scene and all, really allows you to feel like you are right there through the whole story, seeing it all play out before you.
Thank You Again! Hope to read more of your work soon!
FANFUCKINGTASTIC !!!!
TWICE !!!
excellent
ireally enjoyed you story it made me think of my daughter and how much i love her
Great Story
Great Story!!! I've read probably about 300 literotica stories in the past year and this is hands down the best I've come across. The only one I've left a comment, vote, or ANY sort of feedback on.
Brian
u still at the top !
keep up the good work you storys are fab why not go back and enhance every one with at least another chapter,truely enjoy all your writing. Homer.
great
a very touching story
Loved it Lots
I loved this story it was so moving how she came to know of her love for her father. And that he never gave up on his little girl. Keep up the wonderful writing!
Good story! Developed a bit Slowly!
Need to set your hook a bit faster. I only kept reading because it is late here and I have insomnia. Liked the fact that there are few misspelled words and the grammar is good.
Great Story
Great story....started a bit slowly but ended well. I like the fact that you spell-checked the story. Hate reading stories with a lot of spelling and/or grammar errors.
Loved it
Great story, I like a story that actualy has a story line, yours did...good work.
Brought a Tear to my eyes
As I read your story, it reminded me of what has happened in my own life with my two daughters blaming me for leaving 10 years ago. I've had a secret passion for my oldest from the moment she was born. Not one of sex, but of pure love. Even today, neither of my daughters make an effort to see or spend time with me. I barely get an email from them. I wish my life would have such a happy ending to it with my daughters finally realizing just how much love I have for them. Great story... I'll enjoy reading more I'm sure.
Again well done
I am trying to read all of your stories, but lose track of the titles I have read. I sometimes click on one and then recognize it. I now realize I should vote again on it, otherwise it appears that someone didn't vote.
Deliscious
I absolutely loved it. I've been reading your stories over the past few weeks and find your style unmatched, your skill exceptional, and your stories HOT!
I hope you never loose your entheusiasm for writing and submitting your stories here. BRAVO (standing ovation)
Mike ;-)
Loved it!
Loved it!
GREAT STORY
loved it write more about them please
I enjoyed!
Great the great workthe wonderful story Love, tenderness, touches. Nothing rude. 'Love is in the air!'...
I simply enjoyed! I am a woman, yes...
........All Smiles........
.....Great story, great ending,great reading....thanx again for your talent in writing....much enjoyed....
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