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byBelindaTitlark©
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by f-cynyr12/04/05

nice.

nicely done. very descriptive. some very nice images. generally a very enjoyable poem to read

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by lorencino03/17/08

the music of your moans

And you moan at my tender caress
the moan that moves me
like music
touching my soaring emotions
the music
that fills the spaces between us

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by KOLKORE03/17/08

Great find lorencino!

Being so direct takes some courage; being so erotic and accurate without being vulgar takes much talent.
... and lorencino, your echoing 'feedback- poem' did not fall behind either!

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