I really like the sensitivity of this writer. The sex is very well described, and he does not hold back from showing how both men and women can get turned on by each other. The sex is appropriately and tastefully woven into the storylines, which are carefully, if necessarily shortly, developed and highly erotic. After finishing his stories I would like this author to enter some of his favourite stories and writers on his Bio.
Why are we getting graphic detail of other than the main characters having sex or Jenny having sex with others? Why didn't Jim get to deflower Darlene? This story is all over the place. Isn't this about Jim getting a second chance and not about him only getting sloppy seconds?
A lovely story
I really like the sensitivity of this writer. The sex is very well described, and he does not hold back from showing how both men and women can get turned on by each other. The sex is appropriately and tastefully woven into the storylines, which are carefully, if necessarily shortly, developed and highly erotic. After finishing his stories I would like this author to enter some of his favourite stories and writers on his Bio.
Wrong story
Why are we getting graphic detail of other than the main characters having sex or Jenny having sex with others? Why didn't Jim get to deflower Darlene? This story is all over the place. Isn't this about Jim getting a second chance and not about him only getting sloppy seconds?
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