Worth It Still

best ever

liked it very much I guess I'm a soft touch at heart

A fine followup

Mused:
You've written a beautiful love story with, "Worth It." "Worth It Still," fits like a glove. I hope you have it in you for a 3rd chapter. Thank You. Ronnie W.

A wonderful sequel.

I liked the first one, this one was sweet and sappy and just right for the season. Happy Holidays. Good luck with the contest

So beautiful and perfect!

Excellant sequel, even better than the first: sweet, loving, romantic, and real! I agree with the previous commentors: perfect for the season and I hope that you will continue. Thank you!

Wonderful

A great sequel! The best incesrt stories must have this kind of love and caring. The rest are just excuses for sex. Thank you Ron l.

very nice!

You have a breezy, gentle writing style which is a pleasure to read. Good luck in the contest!

A beautiful love story!

With "Worth It" & "Worth It Still" you have given us a truly beautiful love story full of passion and care. Their incestuous relationship could not distract from the fact that Beck & Connor were 'in love' and not 'in lust' with each other. I love your so gentle style of writing. Can we hope for a 3rd. chapter soon?
What about "The Family Room Ch.5"?

Love both chapters

It is truely a love story that is well written. One where you have to be reminded that they are siblings. I hope that you will continue the story to see how they progress through life.

great.... and great....

so, it is one of the best i have ever read.... to my great surprise, u r slowly surpassing my fav Bob Clark Jr. (his Just Them is my favourite).... this is awe-inspiring..... u could have elaborated Rebecca's feelings a bit more... we were driven into sex a bit too early... what she thought of Connor all the time... how she wanted to replace him.... what was with connor... i mean, a bit back-drop would have worked very well... however, it was great.... u r the 4th i am giving 5..... hat's off!

It really is...

...just another really sappy, sweet love story, albeit describing an act illegal in most states of the union...To me, love is love. I don't equivacate. Never have. My bad I suppose. Let God judge...Waxing loudly and self righteously about the terrible sins of others is just too damn tiring to me. Nice story...good luck to 'em all...

Wonderful love story

Anyone who says this is "just another sappy love story" is trying to be funny (?)
This is a beautiful love story.
Thanks for posting it.

amazing

neither of your "Worth It" works are erotic stories. nor are they love stories. they are literature. you created depth, space, mood, character, development, concern, everything that makes for beautiful art. yours is a story of more than just a taboo sexuality. it is a tale of the strength and bond of a family's love. it is a journey to self-realization, self-acceptance, and redemption with those you love the most. there is an inherent beauty in such pure love, and your words captured its essence.

Beautiful story!

Loved every word of it. The story flows so smoothly and it's so easy to follow.

Wonderful..........Sexy

Sa bau wadrega sara ga na i talanoa ya.....Malo

Awesome!

Just awesome... i liked it alot.

Excellent Work

Great story. You gave the two main characters their own appearance and their own self's. An extremely immoral act that seems just a bit less taboo when you read this story. Great job. Really liked it.

Well done

I enjoyed both of "worth it" stories. I've only made this statment on one other story, but you have a gift, a real talent. I'm looking forward to reading more from you, please keep writing. Thank you.

I couldn't of said it better myself.

excellent, I couldn't of ended it better myself. the character's and the surrounding's made everything fit into it's proper place, we never know where we will find true love, it was worth reading. keep writing stories like these. God bless.

Beautiful Love Story

This was one of the best sibling love stories I have ever read in this genre. You have an incredible talent for making your reader really feel the story.

GREEEAAAATTT PART2

WAT TO SEY....I LOVE BOTH OF THEM...WORTH IT AND WORTH IT STILL....AMAZIN....SERIOSLY GOOD....DUDE U HAVE A SPL WAY TO MAKE US FEEL WAT U WRITE.....:D :D....LOVE DIS STORY.....

Keep this Alive

All right! This is an amazing story. You should keep on writing this story sequels. I know it should end sometime but let this gravy train run a little longer. There are only a few story's in this genre I like and let me tell you this is in my top 3.

loved it : both Worth It and Worth It Still

Yeah dude, you really have a way with words. You could be a serious writer in probably any venue, but certainly with love stories. Full of good heart. Amen

best

This story is one of the best in the files. good emotion well written. It has stood up better then most here do Thanks John

Beautiful Love Story

I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Thanks for sharing a wonderful talent.

Wow

OMG both stories were amazing. I laughed with it and cried with it. it touched me.. that was amazing. very well done and i would love to read more from you

Great

Both stories were excellent, and I got the baseball glove joke, nice one there.

M-Azing!!!

It was great!!!Me and my younger brother have been having a relationship for awhile now,hehe,well continue with the stories,one of my faves ;)

UNREALISTIC

chapter one was great but chapter two was totaly unrealistic no guy would act that way and no girl would either when every body was ignoring them and especially after thier sister yelled at them they would have just put thier presents for everyone under the tree and then turned around went to the car and left never to return again as if it wasn't bad enough that it was so unrealistic but you also left us hanging after she tells him she is pregnant and he asks what they will tell thier family keep it realistic and finish what you start or don't start at all

Disappointment!

Worth It started off the story of these two quite well and i really enjoyed it. Then when i saw the sequel i was so excited to read more about them! But seriously, this sucked. Did you even try? It's like you didnt even use your brain on this one and didnt really follow up on the first story like you should have. I think you felt pressured to write a sequel since so many loved the first installment but you just couldnt pull through. You wasted your time and mine. Dont write sequels anymore if you arent going to follow through. This was HORRIBLE!!!

AWSOME

08/24/08
Beautiful story of two young (?) lovers. hope to read more in a future story. Maybe about brothers and sisters?

mixed emotions....

Although i rated hi, and loved the story in it's totality... i find myself abit jaded, and know the romance is a bit too much...

i think it would have gone over better had it been stretched out more... some more in between details, more then two stories...

You could do a story about there initial relationship, all the times they almost got caught, and the time they finally did...

Most of all i think i was impressed with a story that detailed the incest relationship turning into a strong faithful one, instead of it just being a phase.

have you ever read Middlesex?

Crossed Lovers

i loved it. the first one grabbed my attention and i was excited to read the second. i appreciate the love you blossomed between the two characters. It was a sweet story and the ending was the cherry on the cake

Good ending

I would have preferred a bit more passionate romance, but at least there was romance. I certainly didn't hate it or find it "unrealistic". I don't know who the critics were who found it unrealistic or disappointing, but I'm sure that they have no room to talk. You write a great story with some very vivid descriptions, lending to the word picture of your characters. The only disappointment I felt was learning that Connor's name used to be Hanson...oops.

Please keep writing and don't let those Anony-mice get your spirits down. They are just jealous that their attempts at writing turn out more like children's books or wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am porn

Fantastic story.

I have read all of your stories over several times, they are all great. I can't wait to read the new ones you are writing. You are one of the bes writers on this site.

Very Sweet

It's an extremely welcome break from the shallow sex-romps on this site.I really enjoyed it. 5 stars!

Definitely Worth It

Thank you. "Worth It" & "Worth It Still" really drew me into the story. This series is definitely a masterpiece. Congratulations.

Simply amazing!

This is a great story. It certainly beats the countless "Fuck 'em all" stories i have seen on Literotica. I would love it with another sequel! :D

=P

THIS SITE NEEDS MORE STORIES LIKE THIS! I really hate this site for one particular thing...Most the stories here are things to help people get off to, and that's not quite what i'm looking for =P. This story delivers what i'm looking for in so many ways. In fact it's one of my favorites.

not the best

i agree with UNREALISTIC and DIAPPOINTED this chapter is missing a lot. this should have been chapter three not two chapter two should have told of the relationship and all the times they almost got caught how conner built the bench in the barn and how they got caught and what happened to their father. this chapter i felt was way to unrealistic what guy or girl is going to put up with being ignored by the relatives they would have left and gone home especially after the sister yelled at them. we were just lsft hanging at the end after she said she was pregnant and he asked how or if they were going to tell the family lousey way to end a story i don't think you tried very hard on this chapter maybe you should do a rewrite and fix the mess up

Nicely balanced

I enjoyed this story. I knew where it was going but I was kept entertained by the build-up. The build-up was maybe a tad long but not annoyingly so.

In general terms, I dislike stories which ramble on, chapter after chapter after chapter (see previous comment).

This story was definitely an enjoyable read.

yummy chicken wings

Still laughing that they settled in Exotic Buffalo! *And it really isn't like Siberia all the time!*

A Really Fine Story

Sure, I could pick on a couple syntax errors and a fine second (or maybe even a third) chapter could have come out of what obviously occurred between Worth It and Worth it Still. Even so, I've never written anything that was perfect either and these were two of the best stories I've ever encountered on Literotica.

Hats off to the author!

Wow, great story, but still want more. Please write more. :-)

The end?

Mused, I'm a big fan of your stories. But reading this one brought me nothing but dissapointment. You are one of the top sibling romance story writers on literotica. How could you let this one end in such a boring way? The story ended even before anything happened. No drama, no suspense, and the worst, no romance. Come on dude, you can do A LOT better than that. I'm really a big fan of yours. Please continue this one :)

One More

I know this isn't the End.You gotta at least add one more chapter.

Great!

Loved it! Great love story.

Definetly worth it

a beautiful story with a happy ending.One of the best...Thanks MUSED!

awesome

enjoyed it very much. great job.

Great writing! It was very sweet although not really erotic but it was Worth It Still :)

Great story but you should write a book!

I have read and re-read all your stories, and you are truly a fantastic author, you can and should write a book, share your literary talents with the whole world as opposed to only men and women looking to get off. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story, but in my opinion the best story you ever wrote was the 12 part series, The Family Room. If you ever decide to pursue a literary career, email me at twhaolmkaesr@gmail.com, I know people from OutskirtsPress and I could put you into contact with my publisher, Stephen Pellegrino. He is a real good guy.