All Comments on 'Consumed'

by NotWhatSheSeems

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
From the Author

This story is just the first section of a much longer tale. I truly hope you enjoy it! Please comment and let me know what you think.

coldcomfortcoldcomfortover 18 years ago
A nice little nibble!

I enjoyed this! A short, sharp shocker of a story. The violence was suprising and the story had rather an intense feeling of passion running through it. Will certainly keep an eye out for the future.

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