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by txrosenaynay12/09/05

wow....

you wrote this when you were only 17? amazingly interesting, i know what kind of perfectionist a author of your status can be, however this was really good i'd like to see you take this into a novel, it has good potential to be very deep, dark and interesting. hope you keep this one up. respectfully fan in Texas

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