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Bravo!
Well done. Thoroughly enjoyed the entire story!
Excellent story.
Really enjoyed the tale. It is quite humorous besides being an iteresting, sexy love affair.
An unusual love affair. Seems to me that they went at it backwards. But it obviously worked out well.
Neat
I just found this story and I would have to say it was neat. Then I went through the rest of your submission. Some I like, some I don't. But one thing for sure you have a quirky sense of humour. Humour is always good in a story.
My only complain is that you should watch your verbs and adjective like 'lose' and 'loose. A couple of spelling mistakes here and there. Otherwise you have some neat stories going.
Cheers.
Neat indeed
If there is anything literotica needs, its the lighter touch shown here. A few more writers like Ada would be good.
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