...wait a little while after you get back from Chicago before writing a story. It will give you time to think about it. You might even reconsider.
Every time some author says his/her story is true or based on truth, my BS antenna start twitching. What the hell difference does it make? A poorly written story is no better for having been true. These are stories, not crappy diary entries.
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Anonymous12/09/05
At age 64 there is hope for all of us!
Very good story and very well written. It had just the right amount of virility for these two characters. I was really turned on to the fact that it was a recent experience and I like the way you tied it back to your secretary. By the way I enjoyed that story as well.
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Anonymous12/09/05
Divorce?
I wonder how you justify fucking up marriages. You probably caused one divorce, now you are working on another. Way ta g0 stud
Since you were going to fuck up Nancy's marriage why didn't you also impregnate her with your baby, so that when she got her divorce she would have been preggie and gotten child support from her husband? She was still young enuf to have a baby as she would have been only 39, far short of menopause.
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Anonymous12/10/05
Are the women ever at fault?
I thought your story was great and I appreciate you taking the time to share it with us. I don't know what problems the other readers who came up with those comments have but I guess that their marriage was ruined by an unfaithful wife. They are probably unwilling to accept any responsibility for a failed marriage so they need to blast others. Face it guys the girls like to screw as much as the guys and they will be as unfaithful as any guy. In this story she came on to you it was not as you were chasing pussy at the party. Get with it you other guys and make sure you keep your ladies happy!
English
Next time...
...wait a little while after you get back from Chicago before writing a story. It will give you time to think about it. You might even reconsider.
Every time some author says his/her story is true or based on truth, my BS antenna start twitching. What the hell difference does it make? A poorly written story is no better for having been true. These are stories, not crappy diary entries.
At age 64 there is hope for all of us!
Very good story and very well written. It had just the right amount of virility for these two characters. I was really turned on to the fact that it was a recent experience and I like the way you tied it back to your secretary. By the way I enjoyed that story as well.
Divorce?
I wonder how you justify fucking up marriages. You probably caused one divorce, now you are working on another. Way ta g0 stud
Breeding time?
Since you were going to fuck up Nancy's marriage why didn't you also impregnate her with your baby, so that when she got her divorce she would have been preggie and gotten child support from her husband? She was still young enuf to have a baby as she would have been only 39, far short of menopause.
Are the women ever at fault?
I thought your story was great and I appreciate you taking the time to share it with us. I don't know what problems the other readers who came up with those comments have but I guess that their marriage was ruined by an unfaithful wife. They are probably unwilling to accept any responsibility for a failed marriage so they need to blast others. Face it guys the girls like to screw as much as the guys and they will be as unfaithful as any guy. In this story she came on to you it was not as you were chasing pussy at the party. Get with it you other guys and make sure you keep your ladies happy!
Good
Good story of two people in need. But what about the husband. She wasn't really didn't feel guilty over this.
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