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zmp~ dancing leaves

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by LeBroz12/05/05

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They do dance so well
Especially when the rake comes out
And they flee to play...

Just one question - ten???? (or then?)

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by Anonymous12/05/05

*you have been mentioned on today's review

rhyme and rhythm...are the wind that makes this one dance in all the colors of fall..nice images...blue

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by Scott N. Leavitt12/06/05

**5**

Why is it so long between ZMPs??? You do them soo well!!! & I like them best of all you do!!! Please MORE ZMA!!!

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