All Comments on 'Swim'

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hugo_samhugo_samover 18 years ago
Enjoyable

Well told tale of lust in a captured moment in time. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
*you have been mentioned on today's review

this was a nice backstroke of images...enjoyable read...bluerains

impressiveimpressiveover 18 years ago
Nice job, ent!

Made me want to take a dip. ~Imp

Louise BrownLouise Brownover 18 years ago
Closing my eyes...

...and envisioning the imagery. Very nicely done, ent!

(Feel free to write more, hon!)

SensualMaleSensualMaleover 18 years ago
Wow :)

Nicely written, entitled!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Sigh....

Love the imagry....makes me yearn for summer and summer love....(I can't help but picturing the swimmer as you.)

xoxoxo

revy mike

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