Caught Ch. 2

Enjoyed - but?

I gave you a 4 --- it says that this story will be concluded --- but that was 2 years ago ---- I sure hope that all this time you have been working on it will make it so much better.

never the less, I liked it.

More?

Yes, we need an ending, please! (Hopefully, Marie will totally enjoy herself and later hook up with Tina.)

Marie is finally seduced part 3

I loved this story and can't wait for the next chapter!!!

when will you finish this?

I gave you a full 100% rating, but when will you finish this?

what happened to the rest of the story

I really liked this story as far as it went. You left us hanging. Please finish it. I would love to see them in a relationship.

LOVED IT!!!!!!

OMG! I LOVED IT. I WANT MORE, I NEED MORE....... IT HAS ME SO HOT! WOW!

Well written, BUT...

Gee, I'm really touched by Marie's anguish over further betraying her husband and her marriage. Her remorse for what she is doing to her family and her children fairly leaps off the page. Everything she does is only to satisfy her own wants and needs; this is a sad, pathetic excuse for a loving wife and mother.

fabulous

I want to work for you!! i have imagined very similar events with my boss! i came reading it. Please write to me. currious_valerie@yahoo.com

Great unfinished story

I'm wondering how it will end. Perhaps a strapon dildo is employed to complete the seduction or a trained tongue is used to capture the unwilling lady.

Ooooh fuck!!

Damn.you got me so fucking wet, you better upload the next part soon.. I need a boss like that!!! Mmmmmmm

Excellent!

Would love to see more of this series!

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loved it :)

More!!

These two chapters scream out for another (or more). I like the nonconsent element but, women together are just hot. Please take the story to a conclusion.

Great story - it really gets into their inner lives, which adds to the frisson. Best of luck in tying up the series!

great

contiinue

erotic

That was exciting