Did I miss the holiday reference? Fun fantasy, regardless.
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Anonymous12/07/05
I could feel it.
I thought this was a lovely, erotic story. I was sure aroused, anyway. It made me envious of both of them, but especially of him. Oh, my!
I hope you'll write us another. But please check the difference between your and you're, its and it's.
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Anonymous12/07/05
Great job!
As I told you before, this is a nice fantasy story and I look forward to seeing more in the future. As the one who edited this piece, I take full responsibility for missing the its/it's and their/there/they're mistakes... I must have gotten caught up in the story. Keep up the good work!
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Anonymous07/19/16
Please write more
This was a really great story. But, perhaps it is the romantic in me, it seems that it is slightly unfinished. It would be great if you wrote a follow-up story regarding how this change affected the best friends. Obviously, they have much to learn of each other and to find pleasure and a home in each others' arms. But it would be great to see where you felt this event would take the couple. Thanks!
English
Very short but
not a bad job. Nice fantasy.
Holiday?
Did I miss the holiday reference? Fun fantasy, regardless.
I could feel it.
I thought this was a lovely, erotic story. I was sure aroused, anyway. It made me envious of both of them, but especially of him. Oh, my!
I hope you'll write us another. But please check the difference between your and you're, its and it's.
Great job!
As I told you before, this is a nice fantasy story and I look forward to seeing more in the future. As the one who edited this piece, I take full responsibility for missing the its/it's and their/there/they're mistakes... I must have gotten caught up in the story. Keep up the good work!
Please write more
This was a really great story. But, perhaps it is the romantic in me, it seems that it is slightly unfinished. It would be great if you wrote a follow-up story regarding how this change affected the best friends. Obviously, they have much to learn of each other and to find pleasure and a home in each others' arms. But it would be great to see where you felt this event would take the couple. Thanks!
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