Please write a sequel! This story was amazing. I absolutely love it and would like to know what happened with them after their first threesome
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Anonymous01/24/12
WOW.... I absolutely loved the story. I would love to see where it goes from here and if she goes on to have their children. Please write more of the story for us all.
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Anonymous02/10/12
Great
This has to be my number 1 favorite. Virgin gets all holes dominated and the reason why its my favorite DP
This is one of the stories here on Lit that I first read before making an account. I'm so glad I found it again and can add it to my favorites. While I'm not interested in ever get into a sexual relationship with my sibs, the thought of somebody else's still turns me on. This also made me actually fantasize of DP. I wonder how that would feel like.
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Anonymous06/11/12
Worth it
I have read this story 6 times and never tire of it because it holds my attention in every good way possible. In my book this story is one of the best on this site! I say great job and beg you to continue to write storys like this one!
Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! pleeeeeeeeeease! That story was one of the best I've ever read on here!
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Anonymous04/05/13
what a lucky girl!
To have two big lusty brothers with big stiff pricks to fuck the shit out of her all the time. At their age her brothers have got to unload their hot young balls again and again, and they've found the perfect place to do it--up their little sister's sweet little twat. Lucky girl, and lucky brothers.
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Anonymous06/20/13
Amazing!
Sequel please! X
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Anonymous07/11/13
Bogus, Cheap Writing...
I already said it in the title, didn't I?
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Anonymous07/28/13
more!!!!!
i loved it!!!!!! i want a sequel!!!!!
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Anonymous09/15/13
MORE!!
I've been reading and re-reading this story since it was first published and I wOuld ADORE it if you continued this story! Full blown relationship with maybe a baby or two?? Please! This is so damn got! Love the loving domination makes with jealousy and possesion!
I'm jealous. What a very lucky young lady. What I wouldn't have given... Thank you for this story. I hope you continue it. I'd love to see how the relationship with Tyler works out and definitely a baby since you alluded to the possibility and they never seemed to have made it to the clinic for that morning after pill.
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Anonymous01/03/14
I'm still sitting on the fence cause I don't know if I Hate it more than I should Like it
Your timeline doesn't work; Hell I was 17 when I graduated, so I was 13 as a Freshman. She started boxing at 16 so even if she started a year older than me she still would've been a Sophomore and they'd have been Seniors. Yet we're supposed to believe that she started and was winning in competitions her first year. You also made it sound as though her brothers had been controlling her for years; so what was she doing before Boxing? OK; so they were so stupid they they were still around 2 years later! Yep; really pathetic L-o-s-e-r-s, nothing more than bullies!! So at the end of the story they must be 20 or so?
I have absolutely nothing against Incest; when done right! But this one doesn't work for me. These two Neanderthals are egotistical, hypocrites; they can Fuck & Suck for years (Double-teaming a girl when they're Freshmen at 13 or 14) and controlling her sex life until she's 18. They get her so worked up and the ONLY opportunities they let her partake in are with them, FUCKING ASSHOLES. A brother should want to protect a sister from harm; these two "are harming her"; they're NOT letting her develop any normal relationships. They can help her "find" a good guy, even though they actually want sex with her. But they do not treat her with respect. They act as though she's a slut and has a foul mouth; yet what the hell are they like? They're even worse!
At least you didn't describes their cocks as being monsters; but I am so sick and tired of "just relax; you'll like it" when it comes to ANAL. You want to prove it to her, then do it to each other first. Another case of ASSHOLEs without the backbone to prove it. NOT everyone is into Anal and you can't tell anyone else "what they'll like". And how would they know if she'll like it if they themselves have never been on the receiving end? Female friends of mine have told me that anything that touches their ass is going to get cut-off!!! They've fantasized about having 2 decently sized cocks in their pussy and it can be done as you described the boys activity.
Sorry; but these boys DO NOT LOVE their sister, they only lust after her, and their warped little minds are to frigg'n stupid to know the difference. Of course it's obvious that the parents are just as stupid to have never stepped in to protect HER from their Asshole Sons.
love this story! PLEEEEAAAASE A SEQUEL!!!! I read it a lot and still love it. Should continue their story. And a BABY please. I'd love to read more. One of the few that NEVER bore me after reading a couple of times.
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Anonymous02/04/14
Kickass
The majority of people on here don't know how to write. That was impressive. Really enjoyed it. Five stars.
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Anonymous02/15/14
Sequel!!!!
Loved it.....definitely needs a sequel!
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Anonymous08/12/14
What total garbage, I'm a guy and love a good incest story, ...but man, I just want to cut these guys dicks off and shove them in their mouths and then tie up these controlling losers, bend them over while they're bleeding out and shove scalding hot glass rods up their asses..,and break them off. ...not *quite* as bad as the last loser story I read (what is it with going days on here without finding ONE good story?!) where some guy was raping the storekeepers daughter the moment he was out of the building. Ugh.
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Anonymous01/04/15
In my opinion (as much as that counts to you) this was very, very well done and am thinking it was only augmented by the fine once over by your editor. You've laid down some very interesting and potentially amazing groundwork for a sequel (or two or MORE) and hope you make this into a series.
If you don't, I may curse you whilst being happy that you share this with the world.
Please do keep writing because you have a great narrative voice.
The outcome of the brother/sister relationship was inevitable as she was getting frustrated by her brother's protectiveness and the brothers were getting turned on by the clothes she chose to wear. It was small wonder that the brothers took matters into their own hands as daddy appeared to be totally oblivious to how his daughter was behaving. I enjoyed the attention to detail and thought the plot development was right on. Keep up the writing.
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Anonymous05/01/15
You are a God!
MzDeviancy,
I love your stories. They turn me on like nobody's business. Please keep writing.
....sigh..while the story was well written, it was infuriating to read! Why she didnt kill these fuckers in their sleep or report to mom and dad on all the girls they were fucking, as well as reporting it to the girls parents, just to fuck up her brothers lives, is beyond me! Lol.
...setting that aside, we have yet another author that has no clue where the hymen or g-spot is. A lot of that from authors on here, sadly:/ ...it was funnier because the brother was laughing at sis about her lack of sex education,lol!
I would like a sequel! This was well written and hot as fuck. I greatly enjoyed the double penetration and domination. It's what I really love and enjoy when the time is right. Oh and did I mention it's her brothers fucking her? That's the icing on the cake. Thank you again. I am soaked!
English
Amazing!
Please write a sequel! This story was amazing. I absolutely love it and would like to know what happened with them after their first threesome
WOW.... I absolutely loved the story. I would love to see where it goes from here and if she goes on to have their children. Please write more of the story for us all.
Great
This has to be my number 1 favorite. Virgin gets all holes dominated and the reason why its my favorite DP
Memories
This is one of the stories here on Lit that I first read before making an account. I'm so glad I found it again and can add it to my favorites. While I'm not interested in ever get into a sexual relationship with my sibs, the thought of somebody else's still turns me on. This also made me actually fantasize of DP. I wonder how that would feel like.
Worth it
I have read this story 6 times and never tire of it because it holds my attention in every good way possible. In my book this story is one of the best on this site! I say great job and beg you to continue to write storys like this one!
Wow
My God, this deserves a sequel.
SEQUEL
I faved, and rate four stars!
It would be great to have a sequel to this story.
Stunning. ♥
Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! pleeeeeeeeeease! That story was one of the best I've ever read on here!
what a lucky girl!
To have two big lusty brothers with big stiff pricks to fuck the shit out of her all the time. At their age her brothers have got to unload their hot young balls again and again, and they've found the perfect place to do it--up their little sister's sweet little twat. Lucky girl, and lucky brothers.
Amazing!
Sequel please! X
Bogus, Cheap Writing...
I already said it in the title, didn't I?
more!!!!!
i loved it!!!!!! i want a sequel!!!!!
MORE!!
I've been reading and re-reading this story since it was first published and I wOuld ADORE it if you continued this story! Full blown relationship with maybe a baby or two?? Please! This is so damn got! Love the loving domination makes with jealousy and possesion!
Jealous
I'm jealous. What a very lucky young lady. What I wouldn't have given... Thank you for this story. I hope you continue it. I'd love to see how the relationship with Tyler works out and definitely a baby since you alluded to the possibility and they never seemed to have made it to the clinic for that morning after pill.
I'm still sitting on the fence cause I don't know if I Hate it more than I should Like it
Your timeline doesn't work; Hell I was 17 when I graduated, so I was 13 as a Freshman. She started boxing at 16 so even if she started a year older than me she still would've been a Sophomore and they'd have been Seniors. Yet we're supposed to believe that she started and was winning in competitions her first year. You also made it sound as though her brothers had been controlling her for years; so what was she doing before Boxing? OK; so they were so stupid they they were still around 2 years later! Yep; really pathetic L-o-s-e-r-s, nothing more than bullies!! So at the end of the story they must be 20 or so?
I have absolutely nothing against Incest; when done right! But this one doesn't work for me. These two Neanderthals are egotistical, hypocrites; they can Fuck & Suck for years (Double-teaming a girl when they're Freshmen at 13 or 14) and controlling her sex life until she's 18. They get her so worked up and the ONLY opportunities they let her partake in are with them, FUCKING ASSHOLES. A brother should want to protect a sister from harm; these two "are harming her"; they're NOT letting her develop any normal relationships. They can help her "find" a good guy, even though they actually want sex with her. But they do not treat her with respect. They act as though she's a slut and has a foul mouth; yet what the hell are they like? They're even worse!
At least you didn't describes their cocks as being monsters; but I am so sick and tired of "just relax; you'll like it" when it comes to ANAL. You want to prove it to her, then do it to each other first. Another case of ASSHOLEs without the backbone to prove it. NOT everyone is into Anal and you can't tell anyone else "what they'll like". And how would they know if she'll like it if they themselves have never been on the receiving end? Female friends of mine have told me that anything that touches their ass is going to get cut-off!!! They've fantasized about having 2 decently sized cocks in their pussy and it can be done as you described the boys activity.
Sorry; but these boys DO NOT LOVE their sister, they only lust after her, and their warped little minds are to frigg'n stupid to know the difference. Of course it's obvious that the parents are just as stupid to have never stepped in to protect HER from their Asshole Sons.
No Thanks; ( and please DO NOT CONTINUE)
DKP
Absolutely to FUCKING long!!!! Shit...
ENJOYED A LOT
Very well written
LOVED IT !!
love this story! PLEEEEAAAASE A SEQUEL!!!! I read it a lot and still love it. Should continue their story. And a BABY please. I'd love to read more. One of the few that NEVER bore me after reading a couple of times.
Kickass
The majority of people on here don't know how to write. That was impressive. Really enjoyed it. Five stars.
Sequel!!!!
Loved it.....definitely needs a sequel!
What total garbage, I'm a guy and love a good incest story, ...but man, I just want to cut these guys dicks off and shove them in their mouths and then tie up these controlling losers, bend them over while they're bleeding out and shove scalding hot glass rods up their asses..,and break them off. ...not *quite* as bad as the last loser story I read (what is it with going days on here without finding ONE good story?!) where some guy was raping the storekeepers daughter the moment he was out of the building. Ugh.
In my opinion (as much as that counts to you) this was very, very well done and am thinking it was only augmented by the fine once over by your editor. You've laid down some very interesting and potentially amazing groundwork for a sequel (or two or MORE) and hope you make this into a series.
If you don't, I may curse you whilst being happy that you share this with the world.
Please do keep writing because you have a great narrative voice.
Inevitable
The outcome of the brother/sister relationship was inevitable as she was getting frustrated by her brother's protectiveness and the brothers were getting turned on by the clothes she chose to wear. It was small wonder that the brothers took matters into their own hands as daddy appeared to be totally oblivious to how his daughter was behaving. I enjoyed the attention to detail and thought the plot development was right on. Keep up the writing.
You are a God!
MzDeviancy,
I love your stories. They turn me on like nobody's business. Please keep writing.
....sigh..while the story was well written, it was infuriating to read! Why she didnt kill these fuckers in their sleep or report to mom and dad on all the girls they were fucking, as well as reporting it to the girls parents, just to fuck up her brothers lives, is beyond me! Lol.
...setting that aside, we have yet another author that has no clue where the hymen or g-spot is. A lot of that from authors on here, sadly:/ ...it was funnier because the brother was laughing at sis about her lack of sex education,lol!
Very very nice!
I would like a sequel! This was well written and hot as fuck. I greatly enjoyed the double penetration and domination. It's what I really love and enjoy when the time is right. Oh and did I mention it's her brothers fucking her? That's the icing on the cake. Thank you again. I am soaked!
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