Worth waiting for, worth reading, and worth all the "5" votes it's sure to get.
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Anonymous12/13/05
Wow
I thought it would be just another mild story. But instead I got an amazing, gripping, incredibly hot piece of erotica. Oh definetly a new favorite!
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Anonymous12/13/05
Wow..
Oh, my god! That was amazing. I usually can't find any good incest on this site, but this was so wonderfully written, and so hot. I actually blushed when Alyssa made the mistake of thinking Ryan was Tyler. Lol, wonderful. Toodlez! --Ashlee
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Anonymous12/13/05
So...
Perfect!!
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Anonymous12/13/05
Not disappointed
Well written, hot, and worth the read. Will definitely come back for MORE!
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Anonymous12/14/05
AMAZING
Hot. It was absolutely perfect. I can't wait to read more.
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12/14/05
What a lucky girl
and a wonderful story.
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Anonymous12/15/05
Amazing. probably one of the best on this site.
A really great, well crafted, well written story. Thankyou, there is usually so much badly written crap on this site so it's a real treat to read this story.
Very good writing. Good character development. Story line is believable. Makes me wonder if it was all fantasy or if some of it did happen. Either way a good read. Keep up the good work. i look forward to more from you.
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Anonymous12/16/05
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!
You just HAVE to write more about these three!!! Perfection, absolute perfection!!!!!! I fell in love with the brothers myself!!!!!
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Anonymous12/16/05
Sequel Please!
Please continue on with this story! It's too good to end or at least write another story...quick!
I confess I really don't like anal. Don't understand what women get from it. At least men have their prostate. But man...
...THIS WAS HOT. So. Hot. This is erotica at its best.
Though I still hope you dampen the anal. There are other ways of having a three way... *grin* Particularly with twin brothers. Bi-sex, anyone?
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Anonymous12/24/05
SO GOOD
I'm in love with Tyler. Love all of it...for some reason the 'baby girl" really works for me (even though I don't usually like being called baby myself), and the bro-sis thing plus group sex plus a little bit of rough play is basically everything I look for in a story and rarely get. Absolutely amazing, pleeeease do more!
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Anonymous12/25/05
Holy god
Please write more for us. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
Ok Hemmingway...I just nearly broke my poor mindless friend reading this incredible story! Hey I'm old OK? Lighten up on us old guys...NOT! WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO WRITE A SEQUEL? OK then...a new story? Soon? Where IS that damn nitro...?
VERY hot story...I concur with everyone else....WRITE MORE SOON!!!! :)
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Anonymous02/02/06
Good job done!Bravo!
A very good read and here's hoping that we HEAR more of Alyssa and the twins!Keep up the good job!
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Anonymous02/22/06
Among the best ever..
Character development - Check. Pace - Check. Realistic enough details for believability - Check. Hot sex - CCCHHEEECCKK! Talent evident - Check!!
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Anonymous03/24/06
I neeeeeeeeed more
OMG-I need more. I have finally had my 1st experience with my own bro and after reading this, I have to have more. Sequel please. Encore!!!!!!Encore!!!!
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Anonymous03/25/06
Best Erotic Story
Best erotic story I've read in a loooong while. It had everything. Great story line, the dynamics . . . .I mean. . .It's my perfect fantasy. This guy in this story would not even have to be my brother. His way of handling this woman and making her aware of her sexuality is awesome.
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Anonymous04/03/06
Wow
You could say I've read a few stories on here and this one is by far the best I've read to date. Excellent.
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Anonymous04/21/06
OMG
omgggggg.. What can I say? This story made me wish i had 2 older brothers named Tyler and Ryan... haha.. great job!
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Anonymous05/17/06
Mmm...Mmmm....Mmmm
This story was one of the 'very very' best ones I have read. I was never into the bro-sis scene until this one clinched the deal. Very hot....great storyline....the tension between siblings was Exquisite...I actually fell in love with Tyler while reading the story.....
You really do have a way with words (when you're not threatening me). Outstanding writing, extremely hot story. As always, the tip-in is how well you explained the characters and their motivations. Keep up the great work.
....S-Des
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Anonymous05/30/06
ummmmmmm!!!!!
ummmmmmmmm!
another goooood one...
more stories! more stories!
don't make me have to say it again...
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Anonymous07/28/06
Oh My!!!
You are what every woman wants....a fantastic story teller mixed with awsome porn.....if they only made movies half as good. Yours are some of the most well written (nod to your editor), most erotic entertaining stories I have ever read. Please right more.
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Anonymous08/02/06
A rare treat!
WOW! I've read this story 5 times and each time I find it more erotic than the last. Well done MzDeviancy, you write with a fluidity that is rare and you make me almost wish that I had twin brothers! I would love another insallment, but am afraid that it would detract from the erotisim. Thankyou and please keep on writing, I've read your other stories and enjoyed them also, but this one...
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Anonymous08/28/06
My clit thanks you...
That was a TRUE erotic fiction. Damn girl, writing this good should be ILLEGAL! Every word just fits together and runs smoothly, describing the scene so vividly that I could actually feel the characters' interactions with each other. I came three times reading this masterpiece! My clit thanks you very much ;)
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Anonymous09/23/06
OMG
I had just been reading a harry potter fan fic, and then doodled over here... and so I read this story and in my mind I pictured Ginny having it out with fred and george... MMM.
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Anonymous11/04/06
HOW HOT!!!!
Damn girl this is some hot shit. I horny just thinking of it all. MORE MORE MORE of the same please!!! I'll beg like a good little girl if you will!
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Anonymous11/09/06
And again.
Fantastic writing once again. These are the kinds of stories I like seeing when I come here. Please keep writing, and I know I at least, will keep reading.
This was incredibly hot. I want my own set of Ryan and Tyler. Yum yum yum! Keep writing!
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Anonymous03/25/07
thanks
this was great my sister is over from usa and after reading this she asked me to do to her like in the story
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Anonymous04/18/07
So hot that I had to turn on the fan.
This is the best piece of literotica I've read on here in a long, long time. This was well written and held my attention until the end making me wish it was longer. How I would love to have my own Tyler and Ryan.
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Anonymous05/14/07
Amazing
OMG im so turned on reading this thanks
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Anonymous07/04/07
OMG
that was the absolute best story i've ever read! you're the best writer on here! it held my attention the whole time and made me so jealous of alyssa, i wish i had them for older brothers! please write sequals to this one...it's so completely perfect!
Oh Girl that did it. I have to go take care of buisness now. Where can I get a hot set of twins like that. Yummy . I guess I'll have to make do with yours. That was great thanks Jo aka tigcub
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Anonymous08/02/07
intense!!
This was really great! thanks for writing and keep up the good work!!
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Anonymous08/02/07
OH MY GODDDDDDD
One of the hottest stories i read in a long time,keep up the very good work,loved it!
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Anonymous09/21/07
Amazing!
I actually think this is the best written and one of the hottest things i've ever read! Thank you!
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Anonymous10/08/07
Best Incest!
Love how the brothers were rough and controlling but also very protective. The sex scenes were incredibly hot and erotic.
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Anonymous10/16/07
Absolutely Amazing
This is, thus far, probably my favorite incest story, ever. It had such a realistic feel to it, but was still extremely sexual and arousing. I absolutely love the character depth that was established in such a short time, and the scenes were brilliant.
Absolutely AWESOME! Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more of your work.
I love incestuous stories, with a twist of reluctance. I could not sleep after I read this story. My pussy has been on fire since reading it!!! It was just so in-depth, but not TOO much detail. I felt like I was the sister....yummy. Please, PLEASE write more on the lines of this. You are truly talented. I am still trembling!!!!!
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Anonymous11/13/07
Have loved intense Family Sex for many Years!
As I have also experienced Incestual Sex with my littlt sister and one brother, I felt completely comfortable with all aspects of this story. Very well written and great content. Keep up the great work...
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Anonymous12/02/07
Please write a sequel!
Sex with identical twins--hot! Sex with identical twins who are your brothers--super hot! I'd like to see more of this threesome in action!
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Anonymous12/09/07
Amazing.
I have never posted a comment on this site before, but I loved this story so much that I couldn't help myself. It was extremely well written and the storyline was truly amazing!
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Anonymous12/10/07
Good Writing
This was really brilliant, i loved your writing style, i'd love 2 read some more of your work :)
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Anonymous12/21/07
H-O-T!
this has to be one of my FAVORITE stories on this site. very well written and engaging. loved the theme too! more please!
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Anonymous01/04/08
WOW
I AM WITHOUT WORDS TO DESCRIBE IT! SO FAR THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE READ.
English
Yes!
Worth waiting for, worth reading, and worth all the "5" votes it's sure to get.
Wow
I thought it would be just another mild story. But instead I got an amazing, gripping, incredibly hot piece of erotica. Oh definetly a new favorite!
Wow..
Oh, my god! That was amazing. I usually can't find any good incest on this site, but this was so wonderfully written, and so hot. I actually blushed when Alyssa made the mistake of thinking Ryan was Tyler. Lol, wonderful. Toodlez! --Ashlee
So...
Perfect!!
Not disappointed
Well written, hot, and worth the read. Will definitely come back for MORE!
AMAZING
Hot. It was absolutely perfect. I can't wait to read more.
What a lucky girl
and a wonderful story.
Amazing. probably one of the best on this site.
A really great, well crafted, well written story. Thankyou, there is usually so much badly written crap on this site so it's a real treat to read this story.
Very Hot for a Newbie
Very good writing. Good character development. Story line is believable. Makes me wonder if it was all fantasy or if some of it did happen. Either way a good read. Keep up the good work. i look forward to more from you.
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!
You just HAVE to write more about these three!!! Perfection, absolute perfection!!!!!! I fell in love with the brothers myself!!!!!
Sequel Please!
Please continue on with this story! It's too good to end or at least write another story...quick!
Amazing!
I confess I really don't like anal. Don't understand what women get from it. At least men have their prostate. But man...
...THIS WAS HOT. So. Hot. This is erotica at its best.
Though I still hope you dampen the anal. There are other ways of having a three way... *grin* Particularly with twin brothers. Bi-sex, anyone?
SO GOOD
I'm in love with Tyler. Love all of it...for some reason the 'baby girl" really works for me (even though I don't usually like being called baby myself), and the bro-sis thing plus group sex plus a little bit of rough play is basically everything I look for in a story and rarely get. Absolutely amazing, pleeeease do more!
Holy god
Please write more for us. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
one timer?
Ok Hemmingway...I just nearly broke my poor mindless friend reading this incredible story! Hey I'm old OK? Lighten up on us old guys...NOT! WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO WRITE A SEQUEL? OK then...a new story? Soon? Where IS that damn nitro...?
wow
add my pleas to the rapidly growing pile.
you need to write more.
damnit.
Awesome story!!
VERY hot story...I concur with everyone else....WRITE MORE SOON!!!! :)
Good job done!Bravo!
A very good read and here's hoping that we HEAR more of Alyssa and the twins!Keep up the good job!
Among the best ever..
Character development - Check. Pace - Check. Realistic enough details for believability - Check. Hot sex - CCCHHEEECCKK! Talent evident - Check!!
I neeeeeeeeed more
OMG-I need more. I have finally had my 1st experience with my own bro and after reading this, I have to have more. Sequel please. Encore!!!!!!Encore!!!!
Best Erotic Story
Best erotic story I've read in a loooong while. It had everything. Great story line, the dynamics . . . .I mean. . .It's my perfect fantasy. This guy in this story would not even have to be my brother. His way of handling this woman and making her aware of her sexuality is awesome.
Wow
You could say I've read a few stories on here and this one is by far the best I've read to date. Excellent.
OMG
omgggggg.. What can I say? This story made me wish i had 2 older brothers named Tyler and Ryan... haha.. great job!
Mmm...Mmmm....Mmmm
This story was one of the 'very very' best ones I have read. I was never into the bro-sis scene until this one clinched the deal. Very hot....great storyline....the tension between siblings was Exquisite...I actually fell in love with Tyler while reading the story.....
Sequel- Hmm ...maybe maybe not
New story .... YES YES YES Pleeeeeeeeeeeeze
Very Nice
You really do have a way with words (when you're not threatening me). Outstanding writing, extremely hot story. As always, the tip-in is how well you explained the characters and their motivations. Keep up the great work.
....S-Des
ummmmmmm!!!!!
ummmmmmmmm!
another goooood one...
more stories! more stories!
don't make me have to say it again...
Oh My!!!
You are what every woman wants....a fantastic story teller mixed with awsome porn.....if they only made movies half as good. Yours are some of the most well written (nod to your editor), most erotic entertaining stories I have ever read. Please right more.
A rare treat!
WOW! I've read this story 5 times and each time I find it more erotic than the last. Well done MzDeviancy, you write with a fluidity that is rare and you make me almost wish that I had twin brothers! I would love another insallment, but am afraid that it would detract from the erotisim. Thankyou and please keep on writing, I've read your other stories and enjoyed them also, but this one...
My clit thanks you...
That was a TRUE erotic fiction. Damn girl, writing this good should be ILLEGAL! Every word just fits together and runs smoothly, describing the scene so vividly that I could actually feel the characters' interactions with each other. I came three times reading this masterpiece! My clit thanks you very much ;)
OMG
I had just been reading a harry potter fan fic, and then doodled over here... and so I read this story and in my mind I pictured Ginny having it out with fred and george... MMM.
HOW HOT!!!!
Damn girl this is some hot shit. I horny just thinking of it all. MORE MORE MORE of the same please!!! I'll beg like a good little girl if you will!
And again.
Fantastic writing once again. These are the kinds of stories I like seeing when I come here. Please keep writing, and I know I at least, will keep reading.
-MoreRudeThanYou-
Oh wow!
This was incredibly hot. I want my own set of Ryan and Tyler. Yum yum yum! Keep writing!
thanks
this was great my sister is over from usa and after reading this she asked me to do to her like in the story
So hot that I had to turn on the fan.
This is the best piece of literotica I've read on here in a long, long time. This was well written and held my attention until the end making me wish it was longer. How I would love to have my own Tyler and Ryan.
Amazing
OMG im so turned on reading this thanks
OMG
that was the absolute best story i've ever read! you're the best writer on here! it held my attention the whole time and made me so jealous of alyssa, i wish i had them for older brothers! please write sequals to this one...it's so completely perfect!
Hot Dam
Oh Girl that did it. I have to go take care of buisness now. Where can I get a hot set of twins like that. Yummy . I guess I'll have to make do with yours. That was great thanks Jo aka tigcub
intense!!
This was really great! thanks for writing and keep up the good work!!
OH MY GODDDDDDD
One of the hottest stories i read in a long time,keep up the very good work,loved it!
Amazing!
I actually think this is the best written and one of the hottest things i've ever read! Thank you!
Best Incest!
Love how the brothers were rough and controlling but also very protective. The sex scenes were incredibly hot and erotic.
Absolutely Amazing
This is, thus far, probably my favorite incest story, ever. It had such a realistic feel to it, but was still extremely sexual and arousing. I absolutely love the character depth that was established in such a short time, and the scenes were brilliant.
Absolutely AWESOME! Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more of your work.
(Groan...)
I love incestuous stories, with a twist of reluctance. I could not sleep after I read this story. My pussy has been on fire since reading it!!! It was just so in-depth, but not TOO much detail. I felt like I was the sister....yummy. Please, PLEASE write more on the lines of this. You are truly talented. I am still trembling!!!!!
Have loved intense Family Sex for many Years!
As I have also experienced Incestual Sex with my littlt sister and one brother, I felt completely comfortable with all aspects of this story. Very well written and great content. Keep up the great work...
Please write a sequel!
Sex with identical twins--hot! Sex with identical twins who are your brothers--super hot! I'd like to see more of this threesome in action!
Amazing.
I have never posted a comment on this site before, but I loved this story so much that I couldn't help myself. It was extremely well written and the storyline was truly amazing!
Good Writing
This was really brilliant, i loved your writing style, i'd love 2 read some more of your work :)
H-O-T!
this has to be one of my FAVORITE stories on this site. very well written and engaging. loved the theme too! more please!
WOW
I AM WITHOUT WORDS TO DESCRIBE IT! SO FAR THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE READ.
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