I think the story is hot, but I think the language was a bit of an over kill. "Fuck meat" "Whore" "slut". I notice that alot of these stories have the same theme. Why does a woman have to be a whore or a slut to enjoy sex? The story however was raw and hot, I liked it. It's just that the bad language was a bit of an over kill. Just too much of it. Sensual and raw is better than debasing and name calling.
Good story though.
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Anonymous12/13/05
Good Hot Story
I hope you write a sequel.
by
Anonymous01/05/12
VARY POSSIBLE
I LIKED IT THIS IS WHAT COULD HAPPEN IN REAL LIFE
AND THAT IS VARY POSSIBLE,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Hmmm
I think the story is hot, but I think the language was a bit of an over kill. "Fuck meat" "Whore" "slut". I notice that alot of these stories have the same theme. Why does a woman have to be a whore or a slut to enjoy sex? The story however was raw and hot, I liked it. It's just that the bad language was a bit of an over kill. Just too much of it. Sensual and raw is better than debasing and name calling.
Good story though.
Good Hot Story
I hope you write a sequel.
VARY POSSIBLE
I LIKED IT THIS IS WHAT COULD HAPPEN IN REAL LIFE
AND THAT IS VARY POSSIBLE,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Nice!!
Great job giving everyone a Merry XXXXmas!!!
I liked it so much that I was sorry to see it end so soon.
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