All Comments on 'Exchanging Presents'

I loved the voyeur and subtle d/s aspects of this. It was a little hard to follow in the long paragraphs when the dialogue switched characters, but it also gave a feeling of urgency, like a pent-up breath that was finally released at the end, which was stylistically interesting. Great entry, Rump, I enjoyed it!

Lots packed into a short time. Well done. Thank you

see any formatting problems..*fans face* nope, none at all. Fantastic story as always Rumple. You sure know how to write them...

Consider yourself five bombed...

Loved it. Great story. Sexy and sweet and kinky and hot.

Great job, Rumple! You've packed a lot into just one page! It was a very naughty and entertaining read, and I wish you luck in the contest.

You did well Rumply...:D Good luck!

Cookie :)

concise, well written, nicely paced! Bravo!

...all of these Holiday Stories, gifts, angels, cab rides, ghosts... some of them don't even have SEX!

How am I going to be able to ride in a cab without being disappointed...?

Thanks Rumple for pointing me this way--and to the story.

story but I don't think it belonged in romance. Maybe in E/V. I'm also not sure why he would want both of the keys.