All Comments on 'Mystery Turns to Submission Ch. 02'

by littlemissnaughtygal

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WordgoddessWordgoddessover 18 years ago
YES!!!!!!

Okay, this sequel more than makes up for the mildness of the first! This is great, even down to the asshole best friend! Awesome!!!! =)

pervinplainpackagepervinplainpackageabout 15 years ago
Great!

The two stories could have been one. Together they start off slow and arc upward at an accelerating rate. I love the pace and the build-up. This one did the trick for me!

greenman440greenman440about 5 years ago
Yeah that happens a lot.

Your best friend get invited round for a beer.

But then ends up fucking your girlfriend in front of you and taking you up the arse. So common that I'm sure the best friend wouldn't bat an eyelid... just another boring day in suburbia.

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