Gawd this was fantastic! so hot and beautiful, and steamy! I need a man like Caleb at the end of the day to unwind all my tension knots...among other things... ;)
hi ms black,just discovered you.the only thing that broke the build of this story(for me)was the use of the word"flower". caleb was seducing her pussy in that bath,right? they're adults.this is so minor,i hesitated to even express myself,but you probably want honest opinions.i will definitely explore your future writings.a new fan.annay
Hot
Sizzling Hot and well told in a very short space. Great buildup to an exciting finish. Thank you
Hot Aurora Hot!!!
Golden eyes and sex...the two just seem to meld so well. You got a promising career...keep writing.
Bathtime never sounded so
good. I need someone like Caleb when I come home from work.
Mmmmm!
Ooo I love the "ending"! Just one word for this one: HOT!
Very Romantic
Very good, very romantic.
Delicious Aurora.
Glad to see they're still together!
I mean, it's been a week! Nice work, lady.
Alex
OK, how you're gone and done it.
I'm rewriting everything I have... dammm
Very nice!!
neat little story....
well done and suitably erotic! Good for you!
Cleanliness is next to Goodliness
All that late night work paid off Aurora. Well written, and just like that bath, hot and steamy. Congratulations.
Rumple
Short but
hot. The story of how I would treat my woman and how most men do.
Beautiful!
Gawd this was fantastic! so hot and beautiful, and steamy! I need a man like Caleb at the end of the day to unwind all my tension knots...among other things... ;)
Filling
the tub right now. Romantic and steamy, a lethal combination. Nicely done Aurora.
Nice sequel, good for them and Us!
Thanks Aurora,
The others have said the serious, the witty, I just add the thankful
John
Nice job, Baby!
great sequel...wonderful job, Aurora!!
~Honey
very nice work
hi ms black,just discovered you.the only thing that broke the build of this story(for me)was the use of the word"flower". caleb was seducing her pussy in that bath,right? they're adults.this is so minor,i hesitated to even express myself,but you probably want honest opinions.i will definitely explore your future writings.a new fan.annay
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