All Comments on 'Roses in Hospital'

mostly because I just got home from the hospital <grin> nice write wild~

one small suggestion. You could drop "in white."

The break in your stanza's is distracting but your imagery is wonderful, with some editing this could be a strong piece.

~Sabina

This was a nice read, showed nice separation between writer and words with subject matter that a weaker poet would drool sentimental over.

I definately agree with the previous comment...('in white' is redundant and must be removed), but do not at all agree that the linebreaks were distracting. I think they are fine, and your linebreaks in general lately have begun to display a more sophisticated feel for your material. They are not random, for the most part, as they used to be.

is from me.

Forgot to sign in, as usual. :)