All Comments on 'The Hottie In The Window'

HOPEFULLY LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE !!!!!!

I can't believe I just gave a "5" to a literotica story that didn't end up with any sex. Good story. TomJ

It deserves a sequel. It would be nice to see where their friendship leads. Well written and good job.

The authour built up the scenario and the characters very nicely.

The story does beg to be continued though.

Let's see how this couple works things out.

I enjoyed this romantic fucking interlude and think that any more might just spoil it. Write another story with different characters to include your progressive ideas. Aways be clear to your readers. For example, explain what a SUV is, a Ford Explorer means nothing to a European. Also, what the hell is so funny about the name Kelly Green? I've racked my brains but it still goes straight over my head.

Pace just right, two nice people who deserve each other. If you don't produce an equally good sequel I will scream with outrage. Grat work.

Delightful little story. You could add a second part if you want to.

Boyd

I envy Kermit! Well told. You lead me long on a fantastic journey!

More...More...More...please

Read easily, sex scenes were erotic and sensual, flowed well. Great job.

This is an awesome mix of humor and gentle sweetness, nothing sappy or intense, just honest and fun... Now if I could only find it for real... Good job.

Well it's not just the words - it's the flow and the light humor - the sensitivities - you made these people like each other - as we do.

Your touch is smooth and talented but much too infrequent.

Author you are appreciated - With Very High Regard

He has quite a way with words and wit, particularly with someone who is so defensive and scared.

Great reasining on his part in selling the relationship.

bravo*smile* very well done. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

I mean, sure, it's well written and all but I just don't get what it is about him that she finds so irresistable. Apparently she's bruised from a prior relationship and afraid to start a new one. The things he says that's supposed to be the right thing to say, c'mon they're not that great... And then she takes him home and sleeps with him. What? Just like that? What happened?

I know this was just chapter 1 and I haven't read the other ones yet, so maybe there are better explanations in the following chapters.

Really liked it. Well written. Not very erotic, but truthful. Realistic

For 50 dollars and a lunch thrown in - I think Bob got Kelly pretty cheap.