All Comments on 'The First Time'

i loved this story I wish that i had a hot aunt to fuck

Very good story

if i had an aunt like that i would make sure she was pregnant to me every chance i got to knock her up

liked the story....

Loved your story! I'm definitely reading all of your submissions now. Keep up the good work!

Far too much use of the word "gently", cardboard characters, no emotional buildup, all spoilt what might have been a great story.

Very good, Just the way I like it short and sweet.