Hi Boss,
Great story. It really grows on you. Iam not really into homo sexual things. I skipped that part and but I thoroughly enjoyed the story. Let this story continue...
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Anonymous12/15/05
Excellent! Excellent! Excellent!
Thank you for listening to some of my suggestions and inclding them in your story. I love the bi-sexuality encounters. I hope Richard and Katrina get back together and share their bi-sexual lives with each other. Keep writing! Merci!
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Anonymous12/15/05
Superb depiction of bi-sexuals
I think you have done a marvelous job describing a couple learning about their bi-sexual inner feelings and how they struggle to control their desires. Please finish the story!
While I normally don't go for the 'gay' scene I find these tales of the adventures of Katrina and Richard to be most enjoyable. A sequel please!
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Anonymous04/11/06
WOMEN HOMOSEXUALITY IS THE BEST
I LOVED THE WAY YOU DESCRIBE HOMOSEXUALITY BETWEEN WOMEN OF YOUR LOVELY TALE. PLEASE DON'T FINISH AND GO ON MUCH MORE TO HOMOSEXUALITY AND LESBIANISM.
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Anonymous08/17/06
enjoyable but why leave out personal experience?
I love the bi-sex aspects of this story. I never beleived that man was made to be one orientation or the other, only socialisation and taboo force the direction. The fetish is to be orientated to only one side. True sexual beings are driven to seek gratification in any hole and with any sex (but with safety - the lack of condoms in this story, though fiction, still leaves me uneasy)!
Walt, I saw your note that you were stopping adding your own experiences because you upset some people. Some of the best writers upset people. Think of Portnoy's Complaint, Lady Chatterley's, etc. No, you go upsetting people. It might open their eyes and even their legs!
Great stuff
Hi Boss,
Great story. It really grows on you. Iam not really into homo sexual things. I skipped that part and but I thoroughly enjoyed the story. Let this story continue...
Excellent! Excellent! Excellent!
Thank you for listening to some of my suggestions and inclding them in your story. I love the bi-sexuality encounters. I hope Richard and Katrina get back together and share their bi-sexual lives with each other. Keep writing! Merci!
Superb depiction of bi-sexuals
I think you have done a marvelous job describing a couple learning about their bi-sexual inner feelings and how they struggle to control their desires. Please finish the story!
Yes....Yes....Yes !!!!!
While I normally don't go for the 'gay' scene I find these tales of the adventures of Katrina and Richard to be most enjoyable. A sequel please!
WOMEN HOMOSEXUALITY IS THE BEST
I LOVED THE WAY YOU DESCRIBE HOMOSEXUALITY BETWEEN WOMEN OF YOUR LOVELY TALE. PLEASE DON'T FINISH AND GO ON MUCH MORE TO HOMOSEXUALITY AND LESBIANISM.
enjoyable but why leave out personal experience?
I love the bi-sex aspects of this story. I never beleived that man was made to be one orientation or the other, only socialisation and taboo force the direction. The fetish is to be orientated to only one side. True sexual beings are driven to seek gratification in any hole and with any sex (but with safety - the lack of condoms in this story, though fiction, still leaves me uneasy)!
Walt, I saw your note that you were stopping adding your own experiences because you upset some people. Some of the best writers upset people. Think of Portnoy's Complaint, Lady Chatterley's, etc. No, you go upsetting people. It might open their eyes and even their legs!
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