All Comments on 'The Wife Interrupts'

It was very light yet kinda sexy. I immagined it through poor Patrice eyes! The story was just plain cute! It wasn't suppose to be pulizer prize material! It was what it was cute simple and too the point! This one will be a copy and paste for future reading!

Could have been better, with Patrice accidently getting preggie....

I can see a couple of more chapters on this one. Nice comfortable visuals and dialog. Patrice might soon become a live in pet and be made to use ALL her holes and begin to love the nipple abuse and the spankings that she needs and craves. Like the fellow above, PREGGIE? Oh my, yes, of course.

I really liked the idea of them talking back and forth while she was servicing the husband. The creampie eating was hot, but I would have liked more description about it before the story ended.

I liked the convo, too, but the story ended way too soon and way too abruptly. I suspect there is more, but it got cut off somehow.

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At least it wasn't a total WACC story. The hubby got to have his fun too. five.