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Doctor Visit Ch. 01

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by Anonymous12/16/05

Pretty Hot

Hi! Your story is a hot one. However, I'd recommend visually proofreading the story. I found some words incorrectly spelled such as "he" instead of "her" (things spellchecker won't catch). Otherwise, I'm looking forward to the chapter at the cabin. Although the story is a little unbelievable. How about putting something into the story about why they like a middle-aged woman? That coiuld make the story more realistic.

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by Anonymous12/17/05

fab story

i really enjoyed this story.very sexy,and believable,which i always think elevates a atory.

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by 12/17/05

Not bad, but if you

add more detail into the sex and the foreplay, it would have been a lot hotter.

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