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by Anonymous12/12/05

~challenge~

Hi cavu182! I am not much into rhyme, but I liked the rhythm of this, like tires on a road, and the image of unfolding a map.

for fun, you might try and see what would happen if you write something like this without rhyme, but still saying what you want to get across.

all the best, anna

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