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by Anonymous

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by cward212/11/05

Good start

this is a well written poem but I think it could be better. The image of keeping love in a cigar box is an intriguing one and I think could be developed better if you removed yourself from it.

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by LeBroz12/11/05

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A nice summing up at the end;
Looking forward to the day
Two or three decades forward
When I can savor life's memories...

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