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Great Build Up
Terrific story! I loved the build up to them finally coming together. Keep writing for I am interested in reading more.
Great Story!
Your story had a very natural progression to how these two got together. I hope to hear more about them.
please write more!!!
This is great story please!!! When you going to write part 2 for this one? Very nice build up and very erotic
A Sequel, Please!
Or maybe two sequels. Well written and very sensuous. Let's hear more about the characters. Keep up the good work.
Loved it A Lot...
This was really good.. Its almost like u were in my head.
i wrote a similiar one n got a comment that it wasn't
lesbian sex cuz my character used a strap-on.. I can't help it that the character likes studs. Im looking forward
to your next story and maybe you should bring these two back for a sequel..
awesome
a sequel for this great piece of work please
More?
Wow.. I liked this.. I really hope that this continues, and that they get together. Because really, what's sex without love? I think your characters had great chemistry. Good job, and I hope to see more.
Great story...
I love that your stud uses a strap-on.. I think it's a true likeness to many of the studs I know.. This was a hott story indeed.. Love that she worked in a hooter's style restaurant..
Right Combo
The last paragraph captures it all. The combination of aggressiveness/hardness and softness/tenderness with only women in the room. To me, it's about as erotic and sensual as it gets. Check out "Taking Cara's Business" by Swinters and "Almost Chance" by noebode.
Pleace do more...
I just love this story i came hard reading it keep up the wounderful work
Mmmmm
It was almost too short of a story. The build up between them was good and you let us see into her thoughts as she struggled to accept what her body was responding to. I loved the way you had Jaime stop teasing and put it on the table, so-to-speak. The sex scene was made so much more erotic by the build-up and the afterglow scene brought it all together. I hope you write more.
Loved it..
I though that was very well written. Love the dynamics of the stud-femme relationship. The teasing and buildup of arousal was great too. Thoroughly enjoyable, I want more!
MMMMMMMMMMMMMM
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM I LOVED IT IT WAS WILD AND HARD AND SOFT AND SWEET NOW I NEED A COLD SHOWER
I fucking loved thissss
hellll yeessss!!! amen!!!!!
The Best
Well written! I have added your story to my favorite collection.
thanks dude
It OK if your a dude for real 'still a good story
Fuck me
I'm so wet baby
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