All Comments on 'Down by the Willow'

Clever use of the repeated imagery of hands and eyes in the various natural settings with various actors. Soothing, vivid and evocative--a breath of spring.

between the graceful willow

and the braceful bamboo

I from afar watch in appreciation

and am thinking of you too

Ahhh! Simply lovely! Thanks for sharing!

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