my new year, think that will happen to me, hell no. now that's all i will think of on new years, thanks for ruining a good party. a good story, a fan always/
DG:
I still say you went overboard on his bad ass conduct in Ch. 01, but you made up for it in ch. 02. Ch. 03 was supurb. He got his revenge, Carlie got hers and the best part is that they got each other. Be still my beating heart. Thank You. Ronnie W.
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Anonymous12/18/05
Great Ending
One of your better pieces of work. Thanks for nice story. It was worth the wait.
avid fan
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Anonymous12/18/05
Good
Like Ronnie I thought you went over the top in part one.You regained lost ground in the other chapters,and the ending was excellent.Well done.
Well, Hope it was worth the wait. Sorry about the Ch.0e thing, don't know what happened but no use correcting it now. The smart reader will understand it's Ch. 03.
I told you Carlie was one special woman.
Thank you all for the comments. I know writers try their best. Sometimes you get something you like sometimes not. I've enjoyed the ride and comments through this story.
Thank You
DG Hear
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Anonymous12/18/05
Another good one
I liked it. As for him being a "hard ass" it matched the story. I would like a couple of things from you - 1) a Karen story, 2) one complete story not split into three parts. Thanks.
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Anonymous12/18/05
Great...as usual...
Once again a great story from the author. My only concern in this story was giving the cheating couple syph. Other than that, it was wonderful. Jim and Rachel deserve each other and it was poetic justice that the two wronged individuals were able to fall in love and get the perfect revenge. Keep these stories coming.
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Anonymous12/18/05
The Best Revenge is
living well. At first, Kevin's revenge seemed so shallow. After all, he just found Jim and Rachel together once. Anyone can make a mistake. Then his love for Carrie and the discovery that Rachel's affair was a long term situation transformed his rage into reasonable retribution.
Once again, you provided an excellent read. Thanks!
SleeplessinMD
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Anonymous12/18/05
GREAT STORY
GREAT STORY AS USUAL, MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL. KEEP THE STORIES COMING< I LOOK AT OTHER STORY SITES AND READ ALL I CAN FIND BY YOU> THANKS FOR HOURS OF GOOD READING
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Anonymous12/18/05
A Fantastic Story
A fantastic story from beginning to end. It involves everything betrayal, revenge, love, romance it has it all. Keep up the good work!
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Anonymous12/18/05
Great story DG
that goes without saying. But you must concentrate when you're posting. For a minute there I was thinking you had alternative endings. It's not fair to get an old mans hopes up.
That is, that the best stories don’t get the longest reviews? Maybe it is. But if life isn’t fair let it be in this way only.
Congratulations on bringing so much fun to so many!
A very good story, Karen, Kevin's exwife sister said it best ... Carlie and Kevin were met to be together and the other couples screwed up there lives... very nice
I wrote to Lierotica to get the title corrected. So in a few days it should read 'Another Mans Wife Ch. 3. So if you're looking for this story in the future, it will be easier to find. We checked our story title and my editor 'Techsan' did not make the error. Just wanted to clear that up. He's one of the best editors out there and a really nice person.
Thanks again for reading my stories.
DG Hear
It is great that they took a bunch of money from Jim, but even sweeter is both Jim and Rachel losing their spouses. It seems that the newlyweds are both extremely happy with one another and that their relationship will be a wonderful one for them.
Who knows what will ultimately happen to the cheaters. I for one doubt that they will have any long term relationship or happiness. At least that part of the revenge would be in their own hands.
Good story DG, I look forward to your next. Your efforts are greatly appreciated.
It lacked emotion and was quite silly, really. The old plot of having the wronged spouses hooking up is over used and not believable, but the real problem was the story dragged on. The reader could easily see where it was going, but it took too long to get there. This could have been a few paragraphs. You write pretty well, but what the commenters really liked was the concept of revenge, not this dully told tale. As long as the cheating wife is shat upon, the comments will glorify it.
Ok readers, finally got the title change. 'Another Mans Wife Chapter 03'. Now I just need people to read it. It really is a good story. I should know, I wrote it! (Readers that was a joke)
Thank you
DG Hear
DG Hear: I love your work, you are a real craftsman. A stunning story from beginning to end involving everything we expect from this class of story. Betrayal, retribution, romance it has all the ingredients. What makes it different from others - it was written by a master! Please keep these stories coming. While Jim and Rachel deserve each other and all the shit (perhaps the syphilis was a bit extreme), I think that Karen deserves a story of her own!
I really don't think the very last scene would be wise to do out in public---you wind up in jail.
Nor was the syphilis the best touch. Due to aids possibilities, always present nowadays, they might nail you for attempted murder, or some such.
But, I enjoyed the story and as pointed out, the revenge feels good.
But I LOVE happy endings.
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Anonymous05/23/06
its' funny,how the wimps hate a real man
all comments negative are from wimps who wouldn't stand up for their marriages.i bet in that town kervin and callie don't worry about been hit on.
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Anonymous09/16/06
I LOVED THAT STORY REVENGE IS SWEET
Kevin and CARLIE was SO GOOD TOGETHER I Wish Nothing But The Best For Them
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga.
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Anonymous04/22/07
Author needs to read up on his diseases . . .
Story reads pretty well. Grammar not bad; modest number of typos. Problem is, once a person is under treatment for syphilis for a few days (on antibiotics), that person is no longer contagious. So it is quite unlikely the hookers could have passed syphilis over to the two cheaters. I also think Kevin was quite a prick. Readers who think it's OK to beat people up and coerce sex (Rachel's sister, Karen, never did anything to Kevin; what right did he have to force sex on her?) are pretty low themselves. The truth is, violence never really solves anything. One act of violence usually begets a reciprocal act, and so on. If Jim were halfway human, he would have looked to slowly stalk Kevin and maybe take Kevin out just when he was not expecting it. Kevin could be excused for beating Jim up when he caught him with Rachel in their marital bed, but the rest was just criminal. And Rachel really got off pretty free, other than getting an STD (which would not have happened but for a fantasy story). One final, unbelievable part of the yarn is the idea that a man like Jim, who is apparently cautious about physical confrontation, would open the door for a 300 lb., 6'5" bad-ass stranger. He would have looked through the peep hole, then called the cops. I certainly would not open for a person who looked like Louie, not without a couple of Dobermans with me on standby alert.
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Anonymous05/30/07
good story, everyone loves it
except the wimps, when people start talking bout grammar, i know they are wimps. and the jerk saying that syphus is not contagious after a few days of medicine, how does he know how long its been since the hookers got it. His wife is probably fucking the gardner, reason he is in such a bad mood lol dg u still one of the best writers on literotica
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Anonymous09/28/07
Nice Story But Not Really Erotic
I read all 3 stories to find out how it turned out and hoping to get off. Unfortunately, I couldn't stay hard reading it because it's not really erotic enough. And so far, this has been the case with all of the stories from this author. Oh well.
I thought that was so Sweet the way Carli did that in front of her ex husband and the others Kevin better keep his eyes on Carli.
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Anonymous12/03/07
not bad man i liked it
you know just think kind of revenge men would talk if not the old cement blocks and a deep lake one but the ending was really sweet been funny if they had more to watch hehe
The story was well written. My thoughts however are clouded over the vengeful husband. He found her cheating. He beat him up very effectively. Ok, fine so far. He wanted to get them back. I'm on board. The trouble is he has real issues with abuse. He was perfectly willing to beat up his wife, if she didn't leave. He was willing, if he hadn't fallen in love with Jim's wife to rape her (very violent). Let's face it, he hung out with pimps and prostitutes, even had sex with some. Im not trying to be a sour apple. I know that's his character, but without help, that bad ass may reprise it's role later. Maybe sometime when he's been drinking and think she's been cheating, she will be his next victim....hmmmm... What has she gotten herself into. But then, you hear about women like that all the time.
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Anonymous06/16/09
Very Nice
Liked every part of this story & today you have 1 more fan keep up the great work.
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Anonymous06/23/09
Nice
Love Reading from Chapter 1 to 3 Good work .
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Anonymous09/06/09
Oh for god's sake, its just a damn story!
Take/Read it for what it is,...a damn story! A good one at that! All of us in the medical field know syphilis can be hard to contract if the infected partner is being treated and practices save sex by covering up. But remember some strains are more difficult to treat than some. Simply because some strains can build up a pretty tough defence towards antibiotics.
This was a great story. It made me feel good. I just wish I was married to a woman like Carlie. DG this is your best story as far as I'm concerned.
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Anonymous10/07/09
Great reading
I read the whole thing...I would not have made her a co-signer on the account, evidence. Otherwise a great read and how love always finds its way. Let's see how kinky the new couple get now :)
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Anonymous10/14/09
Cute!!
Silly and Cute. A fun read. Thank you
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Anonymous10/18/09
Excellent story!
A damn good story from beginning to end, well done!
English
Well, I had it right
on my comment at the end of Chapter 2. This time he did marry the right woman!
Nice finish - you have a somewhat devilish mind!
Great
Thanks I love this story. This turned out to be a real feel good event. Please do another.
Thanks
A great ending to your story.
Boyd
Boy! What a Happy New Year
Thanks for the Story DG
just ruined
my new year, think that will happen to me, hell no. now that's all i will think of on new years, thanks for ruining a good party. a good story, a fan always/
Beautiful
ending. Nicely done and what an imagination.
You've Done it again
DG:
I still say you went overboard on his bad ass conduct in Ch. 01, but you made up for it in ch. 02. Ch. 03 was supurb. He got his revenge, Carlie got hers and the best part is that they got each other. Be still my beating heart. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Great Ending
One of your better pieces of work. Thanks for nice story. It was worth the wait.
avid fan
Good
Like Ronnie I thought you went over the top in part one.You regained lost ground in the other chapters,and the ending was excellent.Well done.
Author's Note:
Well, Hope it was worth the wait. Sorry about the Ch.0e thing, don't know what happened but no use correcting it now. The smart reader will understand it's Ch. 03.
I told you Carlie was one special woman.
Thank you all for the comments. I know writers try their best. Sometimes you get something you like sometimes not. I've enjoyed the ride and comments through this story.
Thank You
DG Hear
Another good one
I liked it. As for him being a "hard ass" it matched the story. I would like a couple of things from you - 1) a Karen story, 2) one complete story not split into three parts. Thanks.
Great...as usual...
Once again a great story from the author. My only concern in this story was giving the cheating couple syph. Other than that, it was wonderful. Jim and Rachel deserve each other and it was poetic justice that the two wronged individuals were able to fall in love and get the perfect revenge. Keep these stories coming.
The Best Revenge is
living well. At first, Kevin's revenge seemed so shallow. After all, he just found Jim and Rachel together once. Anyone can make a mistake. Then his love for Carrie and the discovery that Rachel's affair was a long term situation transformed his rage into reasonable retribution.
Once again, you provided an excellent read. Thanks!
SleeplessinMD
GREAT STORY
GREAT STORY AS USUAL, MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL. KEEP THE STORIES COMING< I LOOK AT OTHER STORY SITES AND READ ALL I CAN FIND BY YOU> THANKS FOR HOURS OF GOOD READING
A Fantastic Story
A fantastic story from beginning to end. It involves everything betrayal, revenge, love, romance it has it all. Keep up the good work!
Great story DG
that goes without saying. But you must concentrate when you're posting. For a minute there I was thinking you had alternative endings. It's not fair to get an old mans hopes up.
DC
Great reading!
In addition to the cases of Syphillis, it's too bad you didn't fix them up with the Clap, too!
Fantastic
Really great. I think one of the best I have read..
Is it unfair?
That is, that the best stories don’t get the longest reviews? Maybe it is. But if life isn’t fair let it be in this way only.
Congratulations on bringing so much fun to so many!
Great Story
Can't wait for the next one.
Wow
A very good story, Karen, Kevin's exwife sister said it best ... Carlie and Kevin were met to be together and the other couples screwed up there lives... very nice
Big Louie
Great job DG! It's aways good to have a few friends like Big Louie. LOL!!!!
Chapter 0e
I wrote to Lierotica to get the title corrected. So in a few days it should read 'Another Mans Wife Ch. 3. So if you're looking for this story in the future, it will be easier to find. We checked our story title and my editor 'Techsan' did not make the error. Just wanted to clear that up. He's one of the best editors out there and a really nice person.
Thanks again for reading my stories.
DG Hear
Good Story DG
I liked the story.
It is great that they took a bunch of money from Jim, but even sweeter is both Jim and Rachel losing their spouses. It seems that the newlyweds are both extremely happy with one another and that their relationship will be a wonderful one for them.
Who knows what will ultimately happen to the cheaters. I for one doubt that they will have any long term relationship or happiness. At least that part of the revenge would be in their own hands.
Good story DG, I look forward to your next. Your efforts are greatly appreciated.
Charleybear
Great Plot
That was a very enjoyable read.
Did I read the same story?
It lacked emotion and was quite silly, really. The old plot of having the wronged spouses hooking up is over used and not believable, but the real problem was the story dragged on. The reader could easily see where it was going, but it took too long to get there. This could have been a few paragraphs. You write pretty well, but what the commenters really liked was the concept of revenge, not this dully told tale. As long as the cheating wife is shat upon, the comments will glorify it.
Correction is made
Ok readers, finally got the title change. 'Another Mans Wife Chapter 03'. Now I just need people to read it. It really is a good story. I should know, I wrote it! (Readers that was a joke)
Thank you
DG Hear
Great story, great ending !!!
DG Hear: I love your work, you are a real craftsman. A stunning story from beginning to end involving everything we expect from this class of story. Betrayal, retribution, romance it has all the ingredients. What makes it different from others - it was written by a master! Please keep these stories coming. While Jim and Rachel deserve each other and all the shit (perhaps the syphilis was a bit extreme), I think that Karen deserves a story of her own!
Good story but
I really don't think the very last scene would be wise to do out in public---you wind up in jail.
Nor was the syphilis the best touch. Due to aids possibilities, always present nowadays, they might nail you for attempted murder, or some such.
But, I enjoyed the story and as pointed out, the revenge feels good.
But I LOVE happy endings.
its' funny,how the wimps hate a real man
all comments negative are from wimps who wouldn't stand up for their marriages.i bet in that town kervin and callie don't worry about been hit on.
I LOVED THAT STORY REVENGE IS SWEET
Kevin and CARLIE was SO GOOD TOGETHER I Wish Nothing But The Best For Them
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga.
Author needs to read up on his diseases . . .
Story reads pretty well. Grammar not bad; modest number of typos. Problem is, once a person is under treatment for syphilis for a few days (on antibiotics), that person is no longer contagious. So it is quite unlikely the hookers could have passed syphilis over to the two cheaters. I also think Kevin was quite a prick. Readers who think it's OK to beat people up and coerce sex (Rachel's sister, Karen, never did anything to Kevin; what right did he have to force sex on her?) are pretty low themselves. The truth is, violence never really solves anything. One act of violence usually begets a reciprocal act, and so on. If Jim were halfway human, he would have looked to slowly stalk Kevin and maybe take Kevin out just when he was not expecting it. Kevin could be excused for beating Jim up when he caught him with Rachel in their marital bed, but the rest was just criminal. And Rachel really got off pretty free, other than getting an STD (which would not have happened but for a fantasy story). One final, unbelievable part of the yarn is the idea that a man like Jim, who is apparently cautious about physical confrontation, would open the door for a 300 lb., 6'5" bad-ass stranger. He would have looked through the peep hole, then called the cops. I certainly would not open for a person who looked like Louie, not without a couple of Dobermans with me on standby alert.
good story, everyone loves it
except the wimps, when people start talking bout grammar, i know they are wimps. and the jerk saying that syphus is not contagious after a few days of medicine, how does he know how long its been since the hookers got it. His wife is probably fucking the gardner, reason he is in such a bad mood lol dg u still one of the best writers on literotica
Nice Story But Not Really Erotic
I read all 3 stories to find out how it turned out and hoping to get off. Unfortunately, I couldn't stay hard reading it because it's not really erotic enough. And so far, this has been the case with all of the stories from this author. Oh well.
So Sweet
I thought that was so Sweet the way Carli did that in front of her ex husband and the others Kevin better keep his eyes on Carli.
not bad man i liked it
you know just think kind of revenge men would talk if not the old cement blocks and a deep lake one but the ending was really sweet been funny if they had more to watch hehe
Great. and very natural
Very good but it would have been better if Carlie had gotten knicked up by that first fucking.
VD info a little off.....
Once VD is treated right it is seldom contagious.
As I See It
The story was well written. My thoughts however are clouded over the vengeful husband. He found her cheating. He beat him up very effectively. Ok, fine so far. He wanted to get them back. I'm on board. The trouble is he has real issues with abuse. He was perfectly willing to beat up his wife, if she didn't leave. He was willing, if he hadn't fallen in love with Jim's wife to rape her (very violent). Let's face it, he hung out with pimps and prostitutes, even had sex with some. Im not trying to be a sour apple. I know that's his character, but without help, that bad ass may reprise it's role later. Maybe sometime when he's been drinking and think she's been cheating, she will be his next victim....hmmmm... What has she gotten herself into. But then, you hear about women like that all the time.
Very Nice
Liked every part of this story & today you have 1 more fan keep up the great work.
Nice
Love Reading from Chapter 1 to 3 Good work .
Oh for god's sake, its just a damn story!
Take/Read it for what it is,...a damn story! A good one at that! All of us in the medical field know syphilis can be hard to contract if the infected partner is being treated and practices save sex by covering up. But remember some strains are more difficult to treat than some. Simply because some strains can build up a pretty tough defence towards antibiotics.
LOVED IT!
This was a great story. It made me feel good. I just wish I was married to a woman like Carlie. DG this is your best story as far as I'm concerned.
Great reading
I read the whole thing...I would not have made her a co-signer on the account, evidence. Otherwise a great read and how love always finds its way. Let's see how kinky the new couple get now :)
Cute!!
Silly and Cute. A fun read. Thank you
Excellent story!
A damn good story from beginning to end, well done!
Superb Story
One of the best I have read ! I loved it.
Really fine story, DG.
I think this just might be your best yet. Thanks for another really fine story.
Good read:
Superb story. Revenge and a happy ending. It doesn't get any better than that.
Thanks.
johngalt2300@yahoo.com
I have to say the typical ending of a typical revenge story seldom makes me smile. Ya got me this time. Not a typical story. Nice work.
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