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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Enjoyed this write

But would have been better

If that last line were lost.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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Agree! Lose the last line.

A.M.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Intriguing

title. Like the images you've created here. I agree with LeBroz on the last line, it sounds a little awkward on the tongue.

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