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by f-cynyr12/12/05

salt

some very nice images in this poem, my favorite is the soul bleeds salt. that line is great. i enjoy your work.

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by Anonymous08/15/14

Continued... Raw Rainbow

Raw Rainbow is the continuation/finale to this poem, in remembrance of the death of the subject July 2013.

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