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My Blue Toy

byKazkan©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/23/05

Good plot but needs editing

Better spelling---Shorter paragraphs ---- More attention to detail

Good Luck

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by jo_greeneyes09/15/06

Wonderful

Absolutely fantastic,
I am beginning to wonder what is in store, in the future, I can hardly wait.
You are an inimitable writer, I too hate those crude words totally uneccessary, and spoils the mood, for me anyway,
Please keep them coming.
Jo

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by Anonymous09/19/10

an amazing story

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