by No Panty Girl
Not sure what else to say. No story, no character development, unbelievable situation, and boring sex.
I'll echo the previous comment about the unrealistic situation, the lack of eroticism, and the mechanical and boring nature of the sex. However, the tag line for the story was certainly correct; "Michelle confirms she is a slut."
Your stories are always hot, regardless of what others think... Keep doing what you're doing, I for one enjoy it!
Sorry No Panty, usually I love your non apologetic explicit sexual escapades, but this one was a non starter for me. I could not follow the fantasy because the premise did not feel remotely believable or sexy (even in the imagination). But I will be there for your next adventure!
While the candid confession of the girl liking a good fuck were good, but the story seemed too hurried. Could have been better