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"death by candellight might
even be art-like"
you always have a line in every poem that stands out, like a beacon to me, focuses me on what you are trying to spotlight... okay I use mixed metaphors here, I hope I made some sort of sense. This is a terrific line.
as
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your poem has been recommended reading in The New Poems Review thread.
Tess
(but you already knew that :-) )
rattle nabbit
even a blind queer at a weinner roast could see that this was deep even if he was unable to see it.
Sometimes
Not having the sense to come in out of the rain is a good thing. Wonderful as always
the title
makes it a must-read. Love the phrase "skin-thin beauty." Very poetic. Wonderful poem.
this is like
mental surfing. I loved it, the way it felt to read and yes, to be read aloud. You are very deep, I enjoy reading you, always, even if I havent said before. Youre good ;)
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Can feel the sense of being chained, in more levels than is revealed, with a mind that spans time and distance.
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