All Comments on 'Trailing Home Ch. 10'

I continue to enjoy your story very much.

Boyd

I love to see your comments, and I hope that you are continuing to enjoy my story. This is my favorite of all the things I have written, because I have so much respect and admiration for the folks who made the journey on the Oregon Trail. They were incredibly brave.

Three more chapters to go in Liam and Selena's saga...

So very sweet and tender. Keep up the good work!

I love this story. I can tell that you took your time doing some research. I can't wait for Liam and Selena to reach their home, and for Selena to meet his family.

keep writing we'll keep giving feedback, deal? *smile* Gawd i adore this story, you can feel as if your actually there in that time and place and see things so vividly the way you describe things such as trees, sky,rocks...making love HOT HOT HOT!!! i hope to keep reading you for a for a long long time. keep up the excellent work haremgirl, btw...i'd like to see what you could do with a bdsm,D/s with romance etc and lots of bondage,hot sex thrown in there, you write so real but still leave the fantasy...i'd like to see that one in print. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

You know something funny? I'm actually skipping over the sex parts because I enjoy their adventures.

Awesome work!

This story is about love. I loved the senusous relationship between the lovers. What a mature and wise woman Selena is?

I'm truly wondering about the author. She claimed to be taking classes and this writing seems far more than what one would expect from a student.

I've also wondered, are these western trails of yore well documented somewhere? The author seems to know a great deal about them.

It's the sweetest and loveliest chapter of all ur stories. The commitment they shared is rarely seen. What touched me greatly was Selena's statement as to whether they would have sex or not won't matter... she loves him and needs him like air... it was so great... so sweet...

this sort of story is not just good.. they brighten ur days, and help u believe in the beautiful things of life... thanks for this... amongst the slut wife and rape stories, this sort of relationship is rare...

HAT'S OFF!!!!!!

I have read through the end of Chapter 9. It is a beautiful story written with just the right mix of story line and heat.

Ok the hole "she flowered" thing is annoying to say the least use it once but try to keep your termonology different instead of sticking with one word especially one like that haha

I think that the term "flowered" is perfectly appropriate, especially because you are trying to stay true to this time period. Great story!!!

i want my own liam. you're writing is brilliant!

just the best ever. So many dimensions to this story. I feel privileged to have this reading adventure -- for so many reasons. Thanks again...